JEFFER! You`re back! WOOOH!

Omg sako >:P i dont like her >:P

@ jeffer,

welcome back *Hugs*

jeffer wrote:

And Sako and Ohno haven't met yet, have they?

yes, they haven't met



@ kashiii ,

yeah, me too..

i hate sako <<< but i don't know why lol

okkaili jeffer! did you know that i was counting the days on my calandar for your return? and thank you for your post. you sure can read my mind. i intend to put sako in good use and she will be my major spice.... anyway, i'm SOOOOO happy you're back! do check out sho's story! i put some really good stuff into it and it'll make your imagination go wild. as for jun's story, i need a bit of help.

this doesn't just go to jeffer, everyone, please help me with jun's story. is my part too awkward?

oh and people if you have anger residing when you see sako, i'll... hehehehe...... (smiles cheekily because she has a funny idea in her mind) ;p

ok, enough blabbering.

here i go.....

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ohno politely nodded and offered his hand for a handshake.

ohno: domo...

sako, in her pony tail, took his hand eagerly.

sako: are you really THE ohno satoshi? ohno satoshi from arashi right? oh my god. OH MY GOD! i've been your fan since junior high! did you know that i have posters of you and your bandmates as well as all your singles and albums? i really LOVE your songs and your solos! you have amazing dancing talent adn did you have singing lessons before? or is it you are born with such a beautiful voice?

she was holding ohno's hand all the time she was continuously blurting out questions at poor ohno. ohno kindly nodded at some of his questions and tried to pull a smile but he felt very uncomfortable being held by our sister for so long and in front of you.... it's not anything unusual, it's just he felt he just met up with one of arahi's most obsessive and hopefully not possessive fans......

when he felt sako loosen her grip, he quietly slipped his hand back into yours where he could find some security. sako noticed that but did not give any notice of the deep jealousy that harboured somewhere in her heart. you did not sense anything wrong with sako or ohno and you remember the time when sako, taro and you had that meeting with johnny-san.....

i'm really...really... sorry sis

just how can you not trust the only close blood relative you have ?

you: ok, sako. not so many questions orelse satoshi... i mean ohno-kun won't know where to start answering you.

you said jokingly with a bit of chuckle and blush on each cheek.

sako: you don't have to hide it sis. taro told me all about it......

sako's voice died away at the last sentence..... you knew she was never good at lying. something you both aren't good at.

you: come on in sako, you must be tired travelling all the way from tokyo.

sako shook her head.

sako: not really.....but say sis, why don't we invite ohno-kun to our place?

you: that's a great idea!

ohno: is that ok?

you: of course! we haven't had a guest for ages! i'll go and lock the cabin doors and windows. be right back.

ohno: would you want me to come with you?

you: no but thanks, i think i can manage by my own.

ohno: ok...... but wait, _______.

you turned around from about to sprint.

you: hmmm?

ohno walked towards you and whispered: you said that that you haven't had a guest for a long time, so does that mean we are family now?

he said that with a playful smile. you blush even harder.

you: b-a-k-a (whisper and pinch his cheeks slightly for his teasing)

ohno saw you go towards the cabin. sako then walked towards ohno.

sako: say.... ohno-kun, did my sis mention me to you at all?

ohno: where she did tell me stories of when you both were children.

sako silently breathed out a breath of relief... though she thanked you in her mind for your kindness of not tellling ohno she was the one behind your threatening 3 months ago, her jealousy is slowly consuming her bit by bit.... bit by bit.....

when you returned, you three walked towards your flat which was half an hour or so away.

sako and you: we're home!

ohno: sorry for intruding....

you took out some visitor's slippers and put them in front of ohno.

ohno: thank you, _____.

you smiled back at him and whispering playfully : welcome home, satoshi......

sako: hey, sis how about a toast? it's been a while since you've been home.

you: ok!you want me to help you?

sako: no, i can manage. you and ohno kun just sit in the living room.

you led ohno to the living room. your flat isn't very big but it was home and family photos were stuck everywhere as well as the many awards and trophies you won since a tender age. it was a welcoming home. ohno came across photos of you , your parents nad sako and you explained the photos to him, where you took it... why you took it.... what were you doing then.... how memories were preserved in those photos....

you: and this is when i got my first gold medal. 100m junior girls sprint 8 year-olds or younger group.

you explained as ohno picked up that photo which had you as a 8 year old and being hugged by your parents.

sako: ok, the sake is cool and ready!

sako noticed ohno and you were looking at that photo , a photo she was uncomfortable with....... she hid her true feelings.....

all three of you chatted on adn on.

strangely, you fell asleep quite quickly but you can't help that your eyelids are becoming heavier......

sako: oh, sis must ahve gotten drunk, gosh she really can't take up her alcohol.

ohno gestured to lift her into her room but sako said she can manage and half led and half cariied you to your room which you rarely slept after moving into the studnet dormorities in the uni campus.....

sako and you stayed in your room for sometime. sako trying to get you into bed. asleep, you did not know that sako changed her clothes with yours and undid her pony tail......

what sako is thinking: well, sis. how lucky you are. although we look so alike that others can not tell the difference between us, you were our parent's favourite, you got all the fame and reputation in the family, you got the good grades, awards, trophies and you got the scholarships and the respect from everyone else..... now you have my favourite j-pop star as your boyfriend....... adn not once did you come home.... di d you know how lonely i've been? so what am i to you? your shadow? no no no no.... never will i trace your image. let me have my share of the respect you have so abundant. one day, i want you and the others to show me respect! i'm so glad that sleeping pill worked on you. i wonder the other drug is picking up at your boyfriend.. hem hem hem (laughs evilly)

ohno in the mean is feeling quite dizzy... as sako approached , he mistook her for you.....

ohno: _____, do you think you can bring me a glass of water?

sako: sure...

sako placed a sleeping pill into ohno's water when she poured some into a clean glass.

ohno: thanks.....

he drank the whole glass.... sako slowly put her arms around ohno, leaning closer every second....so close they both could feel each other's breath....

it was then ohno realised that 'you' weren't wearing the ring he made you and the scent in 'your' hair seemed a bit different.....

it suddenly occurred to him something he feared.....

ohno:i can't give you want you want, sako.

sako froze. how did he know? sako retreated to the other of the table. ohno stood up wobbling a bit.....

ohno: my heart belongs to your sister. i'm sorry......


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ok, i think that;s about enough drama for now... i thought this up a long time ago and always wanted to write it out. hope you all like it adn i look forward to teh continuation! ^v^

oh and try continuing sho or jun's story. thanks very much for your support and help!!!

THANK GOD HE NOTICED.

Phew.

Sako was introduced somewhere in the story, and initially I would've used MJ (her roommate/flatmate in the beginning of the story) but I thought that might just clutter the whole thing, what with lots of characters, so let's just say MJ has already moved out of the picture.

Having said that, I am glad I am back! lolz. I am not sure what I can contribute with the other stories, but I promise to look at Nino's or Sho's tomorrow. I tend to lose focus when I work on too many stories at the same time, know what I mean? Kinda like losing the voice or tone, mixing them all up.....ANYWAY.

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You woke up with a hell of a headache but the first thing that came to mind was Ohno. The last thing you remembered from last night....

You sat up straight on the bed and looked around at your empty old room. Ignoring the pounding in your head, you headed straight to the room next door.

And found it empty.

"Sako?" you called out, your heart pounding. Last night...the drink....Ohno...and Sako..."Sako!"

A groan came from the living room and you turned to see your twin curled at the sofa, arms around her knees. "You don't need to shout, you know. I feel like my head's about to split," Sako complained.

You ignored her complaint. "Where's Ohno? What have you done?"

She motioned at the porch with her head. "He's out there."

You stared at her dubiously, your fears heightening.

"Go see for yourself," Sako replied tartly. "He stayed outside all night." She buried her face between her knees as another wave of nausea attacked her.

You stepped out of the door and found him seated on the swing at the tiny porch.

He lifted his head drowsily at the sound, then waved weakly at you.

"Good morning," he said, managing a weak smile. You rushed beside him.

"You don't look too good," you said, touching his forehead, checking his temperature.

He caught your hand in his grasp. "I'm fine. I just didn't get a lot of sleep, and after that drink..." His voice trailed.

"You stayed out here all night?" you asked softly, your heart brimming with a warmth you cannot define. Oh God, how you love him!

He gave another smile. "I have things to protect now."

You leaned your forehead against your linked hands and closed your eyes. "I'm so sorry. She's....My sister and I....It's complicated...."

"I understand."

"I know I haven't told you much about her...because really....there's nothing to tell..."

"Don't worry about it."

You still blabbered. "We're too different. We were never close, you see. We look alike but that's all there is to it."

He cradled your face in his palms and lifted your eyes to meet his solemn ones. "My heart knows who it beats for, who it belongs to."

A tear slid down one cheek. "What did I ever do to deserve you?" you whispered.

Ohno planted a gentle kiss on your forehead. "You'll figure that out soon enough." He wiped that lone wayward tear and you sniffed, unlady-like.

"I ruined your weekend."

"The weekend's not over yet," he reminded you. He straightened. "I think you need a word with your sister. I shall be waiting back at the cabin."

You watched him go, thanking the lucky stars you never thought you had for not getting him entangled into this sibling complication you are having. You gave it five more minutes, then strode back inside where Sako was already curled in a fetal position on the sofa.

"Can I get you anything?" you offered, recalling only now that you are also having the worst headache.

"Would you spare me the one thing I want?" Sako asked, her voice muffled.

You sat down facing her. She still would not look at you. "It's the one thing I could never give you."

"You've always had everything," Sako said in a sulking voice.

You bit back a sigh just to avoid sputtering in protest.

"You're kidding, right?" you asked, and Sako finally lifted her head to look at you. She had been crying.

"You got the good grades, you had Taro, MJ...you had the scholarship, the awards...if our parents were alive--"

"Well, they're not, and we will never know what it would be like if they were still around. But all those things you said I had, the grades, the awards...I had to fight for them, Sako. I worked my ass off just to get them. Now Ohno...." Your voice fell into a voice barely above a whisper. "He's the one thing, the one person that ever made me feel like I belonged to him, like I don't have to work so damn hard just to have him. That I just have to love him and that is enough."

Sako looked down, fresh tears flowing. When she spoke, her voice was weak with surrender, her shoulders slumped in defeat. "He turned me away, you know. He knew I wasn't you."

You got to your feet. "He's mine, Sako. This time, I won't share." You turned on your heels to leave. At the door, you thought you heard Sako whisper "I'm sorry" but you did not bother looking back. You just walked out the door, closed it behind you and walked away.

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The door to the cabin swung open the moment you stepped on the cabin doorsteps. Ohno, now showered and looking many shades better than earlier, was smiling widely.



"That was fast," he said, then sobered when he noted the solemn look on your face. "Are you ok?"

You went straight to his arms and buried your face on his neck, wrapping your arms tight around his waist. Automatically his hands wound around you.

"Hold me," you whispered against his neck.

"It'll be fine," he whispered to your ear and you believed him.

You believe in him. You trust him with your heart, soul, and everything.

You drew back to look at him. With your heart and mind in agreement, a decision was made.

"I want to be with you," you said.

Ohno understood, and his eyes flickered. "Are you sure?" he asked tentatively.

You nodded mutely, your eyes afire with determination and passion, and burning with love for this man.

As you lifted your face to his for a passionate kiss and his arms tightened even more, as he dragged you inside the cabin and the door slammed shut behind you, as you two made your way to the bedroom, still entwined, you knew this was right.

And moments later as you felt him lower you on the bed ever so gently, you knew this was perfect.

I'll just worry about tomorrow when it comes. For surely the sun would bring along rays that sting. But for now....

You lost yourself in him.

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It had to be done. Sorry guys. For many things. I told you I suck at love scenes, and I did not want it to border on smut, knowing that there are minors reading this, and really I don't do smut. This is the best I can do. nyahahah!

I hope it wasn't too dramatic, or cheesy or campy. But even if it is, I'll blame it on the fangirl in me. It's hard being objective.

SQUEEEELS!!! You never fail to amaze me jeffer. Your story made me turn all red. I'm excited to read what happens next. But for now, I need to cool myself down. Fangirl overdrive.

sorrryyyy---please dont hurt me .
Can someone give me a brief summary on whats going on with Ohno's story??. I want to contribute a aprt of the story but theres so much post to read!

Thank you and sorry for being a bother .

No it is good jeffer it leaves it to the imagination of us adults

You wake up to the sounds of birds and the water lapping at the side
of the lake, also a warm embrace and notice the sun peeking through the
curtains, you look to your right and see the man you love most in
the world next to you.
You smile because you are at this moment in time happy and contented
you are just laying there in the embrace and you didnt want to spoil
the moment. After awhile you untangle youself fom Ohno.s arms, and
put your dresing gown on and proceed to the kitchen to se what you
can cook up fro breakfast.
30 mins later you finished making breakfast which consisted of fruit juice,
coffee, toast and your special omlette, you carry breakfast on a tray
back to the bedroom.

You notice that Ohno is still sleeping peacefully....... he must be tired
you whisper to yourself, the you blush at the event that took place last
night. You put the tray on the table then walked over to Ohno, bent
over to whisper in his ear "time to wake up Satoshi" but you didnt notice
the smile on his lips, when he suddenly grabs you which made you
fall on the bed "not till i get my morning kiss and hug" you just laugh
and say "Satoshi". So you gave him his morning kiss and hug "i have
made my special omlette for brealfast" as you get off the bed and walked
back with the tray and find Ohno sitting up

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you were just standing there staring holding the
tray "what?" said Ohno. "Ahhh nothing..............actually i was just
admiring you" you say with a cheeky grin, you place the tray on the bed
"try it" as you cut a piece and fed it to him "well? what do you think"
Ohno was still chewing, like he was savouring the love put into the omlette
"umai, this is the best" "i am glad you like it, i dont cook it for just anyone"
"so i am priviladged then?" you just smile and nod.
"what is our plan of action today?" you ask while finishing breakfast.

i will leave it there cant wait to see what happens next

waaaa, kimberleychick that was pretty good. i intend to post too but i saw slowcharlotte wanted to edit her post so forgot about it. i'm too tired to post now and busy lately. i have ideas but i don't have time to put them out yet. sorry . but i managed to write short pieces for jun and sho's stories and that's about it. but i'll definately write again sooner than later. give me a few days. in the meantime, i hope someone can fill me in.

oh and everyone, like jeffer, i don't write smut either. my ideas cover a wide range of topics. please expect sometime out of the ordinary from me. ^v^ <<<i just love twists and turns.

edit: ok , i'm back again and with a continuation.

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you: what is our plan today?

as you managed to ask after swallow the bite of toast.

ohno rested his chin on his palm, thinking intensely.

ohno: let's do this. remember last time i came, i didn't manage to visit all the places in your town. this is the countryside.....we can go hiking.... and take a bus to the nearest beach.....or we can go ...... oh there's so much we can do!

you: hahaha, you're so full of ideas. how about this, since you love art. i'll take you somewhere great.

ohno: a great place for art?

you nodded.

you: i suggest you bring your art tools with you.

you both got up and ready to leave the cabin. on your way to the bus stop, you stopped.

ohno: what's wrong?

you: i forgot. to go there, you have to have some tea dangoes with you.

ohno: dango? tea house?

you: i guess we have to drop by a tea house to buy some.

therefore, in the middle of the bus trip, you both stepped off the bus to buy some dango before boarding another bus to your destination. you bought some extra dango for the both of you. it just happens that that tea house was selling some couple dangoes or two dangoes that are pink on the outside with red bean stuffing and are heart-shaped. ohno noticed them at once and bought a pair and two packets of mint green tea. you both ate it on the bus.

ohno: look at you! you have some flour on the side of your mouth.

he gently used his handerchief to wipe of the powder on you. you smile has you go all pink like the dango you all holding.

you: thanks....

somehow the dango you are eating seemed sweeter than before. is there something wrong with my taste buds?

on the way, you keep explaining to ohno the town and its surroundings, relating them to your childhood and past memories.

ohno: so where is this place great for art?

you: we're nearly there.

you don't want to spoil your surprise and after passing a forest of bamboo, you both got off. you were in the next town but it was still countryside. ohno kept his curious look at you.

you: ok, let's go!

you led the way into a long zigzagging stairway that led to some houses on a slope.

ohno: we have to climb all those steps?

you: yep. want a race?

ohno:ready?

you: set?

ohno+you:go!

you both raced up the stairs. it was so much fun zooming up thise steps and turning at each zig zag. you both laughed and boasted yourselves like two elementary children. you were about to step on teh last step when your foot slipped and you half fell, only to be saved by ohno from behind. the smile he wore from teh start of the race quickly turned into a concerned expression.

ohno: you alright? did you get hurt?

you managed to pull yourself up witht the support of the nearby railing.

you: ye... thank you satoshi....

ohno: careful, angel. you gave me a huge fright then.

you: sorry.....

ohno pressed his forehead to yours when you reached the top of the stairs.



ohno: nothing matters as long as you're safe and sound. so let's forget about that trivial incident . we have a great place for art to go.

at this part of the town, there were a lot of bamboo growing and the greenery along with cicadas chirping and summer birds singing and the sun brightly shining plus the fact that the person you love teh most is beside you and looking after you made you think that today is one of the best days in your life.

ohno: ok, then so which way do we go?

you took his hand and led the way until you stopped at a house that was bult near another flight of concrete stairs which led up to an ancient temple. this house, being near the temple had more space than other houses.... a lovely quiet garden in a traditional style and flowing water and fish pond. the house was a traditional one too, as if the garden and it was a perfect match. ohno noted the name tag on the front of the house..

ohno: haruda.....

you corrected him before pressing the door bell: haruda maya sensei, she used to be my arts teacher at school and is taro's mother. she's also a close friend of my parents. she is more like a god-mother to me. after my parents death, she took care of me and sako until i got to uni and we can both stand on our own feet but i owe her i lot adn she is really a very nice person who has a very very very sweet tooth!

you both hear the sound of soemone approaching to open the door.

maya: _______!

you: sensei!

you both give each other a big hug.

maya: oh and who do we have here? it not who i think he is, right?

you: taro told you? he sure has a big mouth......

maya: ohno-kun, come in come in! i miss you , _____ and tell me how you are going.

you both were invited to the living room where there were paintings and scuptures. ohno was fasinated by the artworks.

maya: i'll go and make you both tea. please relax and enjoy the art.

you walked over to ohno.

ohno: did she make all these?

you: yep, she used to teach at the imperial arts and music academy and even taught overseas. she retired years ago but as you can see her art scope is very wide. she can do traditional japanese art but she can also excel at modern surreal art. sometimes she incorporates the two.

ohno: really? (amazed)

maya put down the tea she made and joined you both.

maya: you like that painting?

ohno: it's very well laid out and the choice of colours matches the tone of the theme superbly, did you use a scraper there so that you can give that corner a sharp touch?

maya: whoa whoa, young man. you sure have good eyes. yes, i did use a scraper there. well, ohno-kun, would you like me to show you around my place?

ohno: would you mind?

maya: not at all! come by all means.

you: you would love it. sensei actually designed the house and the interior even each room has a different tone and style to it!

ohno: really?

maya laughed.

maya: really , ______. stop talking like i'm invincible.

you: but you are sensei! despite your old age-

maya: old age?!

you: you are still so young at heart!

maya: that's much better.

you three chuckle. you all visited the different rooms until you reach one at the end of the corridor.

maya: and this used to be ____ and sako's room.

you both entered the room which was neatly preserved. you didn't believe that 4 years ago you and sako spent your time here after the huge trauma when your parents died. you saw a family photo still stood on the table near the wall. the table where you will come back from school and simply cry with sako, wetting your's and sako's homework. other memories start flowing back and you gripped ohno tighter. ohno patted your shoulder knowing what was in your mind.

ohno: it's alright, i'm here.

maya: yes dear we are here.

you nodded bringing on your bright smile despite your watery tears. ohno hugged you and rubbing your back. when he let go.

you: i need to go to the bathroom. i'll be right back.

then maya turned to ohno: thank you for taking care of her. i was pretty anxious of her leaving the local campus ground where i feel i can overlook her.

ohno: i want her to be happy too.

maya: i'm glad to hear that. then i don't have to carry on worrying too much about her. did you know that, _______, well, she iss a very very tough girrl. sometimes i think she pushes herself too much. she doesn't want others to worry about her. 4 years ago, after the accident, she worked even harder , in her studies and work. she won't accept any finanicial help from me and even gave me rent for letting her and her sis stay at my place. that silly girl. but a good girl. a really tough girl. take good care of her. i really dont want her or her sis to go throught such trauma again.

ohno: i will.

maya: i'm sure i can trust you. taro said you were good and i'm beginning to see why.

ohno: thank you for your compliment.

when you return, maya said: now that you are back, let me show you ohno kun , some of her artwork she did way back when she was my student.

you: you're joking right, sensei?

maya: why would i be?

you: but it's so embarrassing?

maya: what's so embarrassing showing quality artwork? besides, i'm showing it to my future-to-be-godson, what's wrong with that?

you: sensei!

you can't help it, your face is all red. even ohno's is showing a tint of redness.

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ok, i thought this might be a nice.. again, a warning, if you want sweet moments, write them now, sooner or later, i'm going to twist things a bit. hehehehe (laughs evilly). i'm ruthless with my characters when it comes to writing but don't worry, i'll keep it in control and i think jeffer, lulish, and all of you will love want i have in mind. but first of all, i need feedback! pm or leave messages for me please! oh nad do check out sho and jun's story! esp. sho's, hehehe. things are getting exciting....

Uhm. Wasn't the lead girl character supposed to have been an orphan even when she was younger, not just four years ago.

And one thing I noticed in most of the stories (yes, even the other members), I think they were concentrating on more of the...shall we say...'a-day-in-the-life' type of thing. Notice how trips are involved. Haha! Well, I guess maybe it's the fangirl sort of 'living the moment', but I think we need more flow but at the same time keeping it real.

So maybe this is just my opinion, and blast me if you will, but I think Ohno's story is going quite long already (ten pages. wow! we're prolific!) so I was thinking it'd be better if we build up sort of a climax for this one, leading to the denoument, so we could wrap it up. Then start another one. This is getting too....cluttered, if I may use that word, if we pile it all in. ;D

But that's just my opinion.

Anyway, let me continue, and see if I can steer this to a sort-of-climax. Tee-hee!

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Ohno was too absorbed with the easel set up before him. Paintbrushes were strewn around his feet, forgotten, as he resorted to the use of his fingers for bringing the canvas to life.

Pride swelled within you as you stood at the doorway of Sensei's studio, watching his rapt expression.

Sensei came beside you and nudged you playfully with an elbow.

"You two seem serious," she observed, and you blushed. She sighed, seeing your reaction. "I'm not entirely too sure about this, though...."

Disconcerted by her sudden hesitation, you turned to her hastily. "He's a good guy."

"I know he is," Sensei said smoothly. "I always knew my son was a good judge of character and when he said Ohno is a good guy, I believed him. But I am not entirely assured that he is good for YOU, though..."

"Taro told you that, too?" you asked bitterly. You should've known Taro would still have hurt feelings over this.

"Of course not. He is not that opinionated." You felt a measure of relief. Taro's in the clear.

Sensei went on. "I know you have labored over the fact that you two were from different worlds, that it won't be easy...Maybe you would make it through this together, maybe you can actually make it work...But I worry about you. Can you...bear with it?"

"I will," you replied, firm and determined. When in the past you weren't sure, now you are. You will see it through. Together.

Sensei sighed in surrender, then smiled. "Fine, then. If you're that sure, I guess I'll just have to trust you. Keep in mind, though, that you are still much too young, barely just started at university. You have your whole life in your hands. Don't grip it too tight."

Sensei's words kept ringing in your ears even as you and Ohno bade your farewells and left. Trust.

You do have to trust, right? Trust him, trust in the both of you.

"Ahh, that was so much fun!" Ohno exclaimed, stretching his hand out, embracing the wind as you both walked the pathway to the lakehouse after getting off the bus. "I'd love to go back there soon."

"Well, she did say you were welcome anytime."

"She did, didn't she?" he grinned like a happy schoolboy and bounded up the steps to the door. Suddenly he came to a stop and pulled something wedged under the door.

It was a piece of paper. Ohno opened and read it.



He seemed to take his time reading it, but you noticed the tensing of his arm, the stiffening of his shoulder as he read.

"Ohno?" you asked, cautiously, as you joined him.

He looked at you, the playful smile gone, now replaced with a frown of worry.

"It's...."

uwaa~~!!! that's so climatic-kind of feeling. i was holding my breath and suddenly it ends!! haha

i agree jeffer. after i wrote that i did think when maybe i was a bit longwinded and yes we have to end this but in the proper manner....

i can't really handle much of a climax so i'll leave it to you people who are better at writing than me.. i tend to rush my idea out rather than polish them properly. sorry for the quality!

ok, here i go.....

edit: please ignore this part i wrote. kimberleychick is going to continue and end this story. not me as we both have agreed.

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ohno: it's..... it's from your sister...... most probably.....

you started to worry and took the paper ohno offered to you.

on it wrote: i'll be at our parent's grave. come alone or regret it.

you: what is she up to?

ohno: i have a bad feeling towards this. i think i should come along.

you: no, let me think a while....

there was a pause.

you: i'll try calling her first.

you dialled your sister's phone number but it was switched off. you're panicking a little... thinking if she is going to do something foolish again.

you: i'll go alone.

ohno: no, let me go with you.

you: satoshi...

you gave him a reassuring look.

you: it's just going to be a sibling chat. it'll be fine. trust me.

you kissed him on the cheek.

you: itekimesu! i'll be right back. wait for me for dinner, ne?

as you waved the still worried ohno.

you walked to the cementary and to your parent's grave. sako was already there.

you: sako? what do you want to talk about.

sako didn't pay much attention to your presence aside from bowing in front of your parent's grave ...

you: sako? is everything ok?

sako turned towards you and she left the grave and all the way she kept silent until reaching the forest of bamboo behind the cementary. it was there she halted and stared at you but you felt something is wrong... her eyes... they were full of anger.....
sako: i've had enough. i hate the fact that you have everything. why do you deserve them? i've strived equally hard. how come i'm not as good as you?

you: sako, i-

she reached out something from inside her..... a small silver pistol.....

sako: what are your last words sis?
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alright, before i go, if you think this is crap pm me so i can change it. i will hate to ruin this story.

edit: please ignore this part i wrote. kimberleychick is going to continue and end this story. not me as we both have agreed.

ahhhhhhhh jl2020 bet me again lol i had a different story and it proberbly would have ended it completely so a new story can start if you want me to add it to the post it has a different ending i will post it just let me know