From your hotel room in Tokyo, you stared out at the city skyline and sighed. It sure feels good to be back here, you think. You wonder if your decision to leave was too hasty. It's not too late to come back, I guess. Most of my stuff is still at my old apartment, and I don't really know anybody in Osaka anyway... The text message alert of your cell phone interrupts your thoughts. You smile as you read the incoming message :

________, I'm glad you came back. I'd like to see you tonight. Meet me at my house at 9 tonight.
Sho-chan

He calls himself 'Sho-chan?' you think to yourself and laugh. Wow, you really laugh. It's been so long since you've had a reason to smile.

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Butterflies invade your stomach as you get closer to Sho's. You've missed him so much, but yet it still feels a bit awkward since you haven't been near each other for so long. You ring the buzzer and hear him inside shuffling to get to the door. When he opens it, you laugh at his appearance. His hair is tousled, like he just woke up. His cheeks are a bit red and he wears a doofy grin. As he greets you, you smell what the problem is...he's been drinking.

"Hey, __________! Glad you could make it. Come in, come in."
You follow him inside and try to hold in your laughter as he trips over nothing and almost falls to the floor. He won't remember this visit tomorrow, you think to yourself. Much to your surprise, though, Sho is just as attentive to you when tipsy as he is when he's sober.

"So I see you got the flyer. No doubt that's the only reason you came back," he says with a bit of sadness in his voice despite the large smile he wears. You shake your head. "No, that's not the only reason. I came back to...to..." Your pride wouldn't let you finish that sentence. I came back to see you again, and hope that you beg me to stay...

"...to??" Sho says. You smile. "Nandemo nai (It's nothing)." He nods.

About 15 seconds of uncomfortable silence passes before Sho notices the bag in your hand. "What's that? Staying the night?" You tap him on the head. "Yeah right. You wish. It's my art supplies. I'm kinda having a block. I can't think. I was wondering if you could help me..."

Sho pours himself another drink. "I'm the LAST person you'd want to help you in that department." You laugh again, remembering that strange figure he'd drawn in the van that day. "True, but..." your words get stuck in your throat. "But...?" Sho prods. Just say it, _________. You've come too far now. You gather up courage and say, "...but I've always felt free when I'm around you."

"Free?" Sho asks with a confused look on his face. "I don't get it."
"When I feel 'free', my art flows out. It's usually when I'm happy, feeling secure, when I have no worries...I call it feeling 'free.'"

Sho nods, then walks over to the closest window. You can tell he's happy to hear those words, but at the moment he realizes the need to be professional since the contest deadline is the next day. "Uh huh. Okay, so the theme is DREAM, right? So...what do you dream about?"

At that instant, an image flashed in your mind....

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[Note: Yes, yes, yes this is Sho's butt. Those who have seen "Kiiroi Namida" know so ]

"___________! Hey __________, did you hear me??"
"I'm sorry. What?" You say, snapping out of your trance.

He sighs. "I said, maybe you should sleep on it...here. Since, you know, you say you feel 'free' when I'm around, maybe you just need some rest and....me around." He looks kinda shy as he says this and it makes your heart flutter.

After 3 more drinks, Sho had fallen asleep on the sofa. You watch him sleeping and feel sooooo at peace. On a whim, you trace the outline of his face with your finger. He moves a little and mumbles, something about a "cute puppy" and "tickles." Watching him this way gives you an idea. You grab your supplies, sit on the floor next to his stomach, and begin to create...

Oh.... my.. god!! is she having some dirty thoughts?? LOL!!

well...if by "she" you mean me, then yes...always having dirty thoughts about sho... buuuuut if you mean the "you" character, then i guess she got a little pink...they still have yet to do the do!! wondering if i'd get a warning for going there since we have so many youngsters on the forum...i might do a separate fanfic that GOES THERE

hmm...if by youngsters you mean me then
I understand ...but if I was the one to give warnings,
I'd totally spare you (hey, I'm only 12 but I completely
understand what GOES THERE means )

i'm soo loving this thread...

makes me wanna scream "more, more"

I'm gonna jump in for a second. I'm not caught up on the story, so I can't add anything. *ducks so nobody hits her with stuff they might throw at her for being such a slacker*

I do want to discuss my thoughts on the "sex scenes" since it has come up. One thing that can be done is have the story lead up to it, like they walk into the bedroom, then cut-scene to the next morning (or a few hours later, whatever). That way it is implied, but the story stays "clean" for our younger readers.

If you really want to write out the scene...first, not to detailed. Second, I would suggest you write it up, then send it to a mod, or probably even an admin, and ask them if it is ok, before you post it. They would know best if it is "too much" for their forum.

But in my opinion, it is best to imply it happens, but not actually write about it. As hoshinomi said she might do, you can always write your own fanfic if you want to go there. And then you would be able to put a warning and a rating (R, or X though I don't think X is allowed in this forum).

In the big picture, just use your best judgment. If you think it is something a parent would not want their young teen reading, you probably should not write it.

yeah...thats what i know...and so i probably wont even do my own fanfic cuz when i feel like writing steamy love scenes, its beyond whats allowed here ...whatever comes out, comes out and i KNOW it would make some people uncomfortable...as far as your suggestion, i kinda did that in the park scene under the blanket...it was implied that they kinda went a bit further but i didnt acutally write about it...im old enough to know that i wouldnt want my kids reading a lot of what goes on thru my mind so im gonna respect other parents' wishes about that

sorry kiddies...no more booty pix...LoL

So now that were all done about those "scenes" ..can someone please continue the story?? I really want to know what happens next

ok. this is what i dreamt last night, and in the morning i was like "WTF?"

You were running through a narrow street, wearing white shorts and a simple white T-shirt. It was night, but you could see pretty well. You looked behind you. There was nothing, still you felt something that made you run. Run for your life. You could clearly hear a car behind you, but everytime you looked back, the sound disappeared. Then you saw a house. It didn't looked creepy at all, it was nice, so you went inside. There was only one room, it was white, and on the wall was written "Welcome home".
Then you heard the door open behind you. You turned around and faced.... Quasimodo.
"POCAHONTAS! WHERE DID YOU HIDE MY DUMMY?"
"He?" Quasimodo pulled out a gun and started shooting at you, but only butterflies came out. You jumped out of the window, and then...

.. BANG! Your face hit the cold floor. You fell down from the couch. (yes, i fell down from my bed too, i do it often xD)

"Aaah!! ______ are you OK?? Did you hit something? Does it hurt somewhere? ANSWER ME!" Sho pulled you up. He really looked worried. Seriously it's not that high to be this worried
You said to him that you're ok, but he kept on panicing. After he checked 3 times that you really are ok, don't have any brain damage, or wounds, he calmed down.

"So.. had any ideas?" he looked at your art stuff. Wow, he remembered about last night
"Maybe.."
"Can I take a look?" he reached for your supplies, but you were faster than he was.
"NO! It's not ready!"
"Ok. Then how about you show it to me next saturday?" wow, that was fast, did he plan this? he grinned at your confused face, and handed you an envelope. You opened it and saw a ticket, written on it "ARASHI Marks 2008 Dream "A" Live"
"S-Sho.. this.."
"Concert ticket. I want you to come. You'll love it, it will be like in Disney Land! So... please?" he looked at you with puppy dog eyes, which you know you just can't resist...

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Disney Land, here I come...

i'm back people i 'm back!!!

ok, so here it goes...

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yamada: well, i'm glad you decided to come back.

you : i'm very sorry for causing such inconvenience.

yamada: oh no no no. i understand. ryo has already been exspell from our program if you're worried about that. you're feeling better?

you: yes, thank you for taking care of me.

yamada: well, then it's my duty, isn't it? so where's your work?

you: here is my sketch and the costume dream is here.

you handed yamada a folder containing your sketch of a costume you made and a briefcase which contains the costume you made last night using sho's measurement whilst he was sleeping.....

yamada: oh, this is interesting... so this is DREAM?

you: yes.

yamada: well, it certainly is out of the ordinary. good work, (your surname). the winner will be announced sometime before arashi's next concert.

you: thank you very much.

you bowed and exited yamada's office.

sola and the others were already outside the office.

sola: how did it go?

yuki: yea, was yamada giving you a hard time?

shin: surely he understands?

you: guys it's O K. but i really appreciate your concern.

yuki: really, i never knew ryo was that sort of person. you close to him, shin?

shin: not really. but look, we all agreee his a genius.

sola: a, you left something. a genius with a serious need to fix his morals.

you: look, guys. what has passed has passed. let's move on, shall we?

sola hugged you.

sola : you sure have a big heart.

with that, you left with your friends chatting happily about attending the coming arashi concert. (<<<yes you and the above are going to the concert too)

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it is a day before arashi's next concert and you simply couldn't sit still at home. yamada assembled all four of you and announced the winner of the competition.

yamada: well, you all surprised us and even kitagawa-san who was one of the judges. by the way, you all did extremely well. sola's scrupture, shin's photobook, yuki's painting and (you)'s costume all deliver the theme DREAM superbly and we as judges find it a pleasure to have seen and judge your work. now would kitagawa-san announce the results. kitagawa san please.

johnny: it was a hard decision i assure you. but we all agree that (you)'s costume is the best out of the 4. congradulations.

you came up and shook johnny san's hand.

johnny: oh and if you don't mine (you) i wonder if it's possible if you would mind me using your costume in the upcomming arashi concert?

you: i....i... i'm honoured.

johnny: then it's settled. the concert management would expect you backstage to help out with arashi's fitting and changing. as for the remaining 3, i hope you have learnt a lot.

shin, yuki, sola: thank you very much for taking care of us!

the three left after further congraduating you.

johnny: now, (you), let's discuss your contract with us.

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on the day of the concert, you are backstaged and it is 7hours before the concert. arashi is already prepareing for the final run down and rehearsal.

you saw sho practising hard and when he and other members finally got to return to their resting room. you entered with their five costumes you made with the help of yamada and the other assistents. the five showed curious looks but sho was still the happiest of the five. you smiled shyly at them becasuse of sho's presence.



yamada: i think you all have met (you) here. she is the winner of DREAM contest and her work ..

he pointed at the costumes you were holding

yamada: will be one of the costumes in the concert. she will help you with the fitting now so that they are made to suit your figure perfectly.
(you), when you are done, tell me if there is any need for ajustments ok, i need to check something with the sound effects coordinator.

he exited the room and you are left with the other 5 arashi members holding their costumes.
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ok, that's from me, i hhope i didn't ruin anything, you can all think about how the costume looks like.....^V^

yay i finally read the continuation!!!!!!!!!! (after one week)^^ hehehe i really like this story

uwaaah..so quiet here(whispers)

huhhhuuuuu~ it's silenceee.

WAIT!

Is she is she is she going to have to DRESS THEM UP??

why does this topic always makes me imagine things that are *censored*? XD

anyway someone pls continuee? if noone will then I will, but first I have to get these *censored* thoughts out of my mind. xD

I can't wait till someone continues! It's such a good story and sometimes I felt I was gonna burst with excitement but had to remain calm due to everyone else sleeping but I wanted to congratulate everyone who put something in cuz I thought it was amazing all the good ideas everyone came up with. Someone pleeeaaasssseeee continue I can't wait to see what happens next!!

You smile at the guys. They smile back at you.
“So let’s get started” You say.” Who’s first?”
“I nominate Sho” Nino smiles
“Yeah, I second that vote.-
“But I want to go first!” Aiba whines.
“Let Aiba go first” Sho says
“Yeah let Aiba go first!” Aiba stomps his feet. You laugh.
“Come on Aiba.” You say. He licks his tongue at Nino and Ohno and walks with you to the fitting room.
“I should be changing huh?” He says.
“Yeah, don’t worry I’ll go until you change.” You turn around.
“Okey-dokey” He says. You walk out to where the guys are waiting.
You’re really nervous. You all most can hear your heartbeat.
They stare at you. “_ is it true what Aiba said about you and Sho having you know” Nino asks
You stare at Sho. He gets up and walks back into the room where Aiba’s changing. Suddenly all you hear is “You never can keep a secret” You hear a slap.
Then you hear “But I thought you would want the guys to know I mean I would if I was with a pretty girl.” You laugh again.
“I assume it’s true” Nino says. Sho walks out with a solemn face and stands by me
“_ will not answer that because she doesn’t have to” He stands by me and folds his arms.
“Whatever by the look on your faces we know it’s true.” Ohno smirked
“So what’s your story?” Jun asks.
“I was born in Tokyo. My mother and father divorced when I was young and I have one brother he’s older than me. I also-
“I’m here!” Aiba came out in his costume. The guys cracked up laughing.
(I'm sorry if it's no good. I just wanted to post because no one continued the story )