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[Ongoing] Regret and Second Chance (Sakuraiba)
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shida
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 9:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

hehe...

well i cant comment much about it ne...dont want to spoil the thrill..XDDXD

~YES ur story is getting into me and I WANT aiba and sho to have a HAPPY ENDING!

~lets support each other ne..XD Heart Heart

~I WONDER WHETHER I SHOULD WRITE ANOTHER FIC AFTER THIS FIC ENDS...coz i do have some plot but the pairing is different..XD wink
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 8:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

haha i can't promise you a happy ending but i will take your demand into consideration XDDDD

yesh you have my support all the wayy. no matter how your story ends. big grin

YES YES YES WRITE ANOTHER ONE!!!!! you should seriously write another one because i will be very sad if this is the only fic you ever write cry

okiee, bye bye *goes to type update*
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 28, 2008 2:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

(Chapter Fifth-teen)

“Do you think Sho is somewhat different?” Ohno asked while waiting for his ramen to arrive.

Jun ignored the question as he was enjoying his fried rice. Seeing Jun being ignorant to him, Ohno tried again. He won’t stop until Jun gives him some answer.

Jun and Ohno had gone out for their dinner to Ohno’s favourite place. They invited Nino too but Nino declined as he said he is busy with his game.

“Ne Jun, do you think he is somewhat different?” Ohno repeated his question and this time he starts poking Jun’s rib.

Jun who knew his leader best, know Ohno would not stop for nothing (except for the ramen, which is coming very late) until he gets some answer.

“Stop it!” He demanded and slapped Ohno’s hand away.

“Not until you answer me!” Ohno replied, adamantly.

“Yes, Sho somehow look a bit happy if that’s the answer you are looking for!”

Ohno stopped and smile.

“Yes, he does look happy ne ever since after we went to Aiba’s grave on his birthday. Seems like he is getting back to being himself again” Ohno said, as he looked at his ramen which arrived when he stopped poking Jun.

“Yea, and he seem to have the same look he is having whenever he is with Aiba” Jun added.

“Do you think Sho had been keeping secret from us?”

“Well let him settle down first, whenever he is keeping from us, I think he will tell us when the time is right” Jun said and continue digging into his fried rice while Ohno enjoying his ramen.



(SHIDA said: Its JunToshi in this chapter… I getting lost of words to comment more as my head keep thinking about the ending and having a thought fight of how the ending should ends….)
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 28, 2008 2:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

shida wrote:
“Well let him settle down first, whenever he is keeping from us, I think he will tell us when the time is right” Jun said and continue digging into his fried rice while Ohno enjoying his ramen.


ahahahaa the Arashi boys and their food. Now i want fried rice drooling


I KNOW HOW THE STORY SHOULD END!!!!


nana_chan wrote:
you know, here's what i've decided.

Shin is actually Aiba.

Here's my idea. In the car accident, Aiba wasn't killed but was badly hurt and he lost all of his memory. And there was a body at the scene which they decided was Aiba's bcuz of the ID and the person that they visit at the grave is not Aiba. innocent

anyway, he was badly hurt and lost all his memory and had to have major plastic surgery done because of the burns and such so he was unrecognizable. and now he and Sho are bonding and by some miracle he'll remember who he is and Arashi will be Arashi again and everyone will live happily ever after Cheer

okay, i know that's not really going to happen, but it's what i WANT to happen wish


THAT'S HOW IT SHOULD END!!!!!! big grin
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shida
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 28, 2008 2:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

hahahaha....u really want me to end it with happy ending but i still clueless of how ur story should end ne.... innocent

oh yea....i posted another fic in one-shot section..do check it out ne..XD
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 28, 2008 2:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

haha well that's just what i want to happen. the ending of course is up to you. innocent

i just posted my latest chapter!! Wohoo!

...and i wrote a one-shot yesterday. i'll read yours too! big grin
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shida
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 28, 2008 2:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

~im goin to check it out now!
~from the comment you made something happened to sho! innocent
~lets suport each other ne Heart
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 28, 2008 4:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ahaha the scenerio that nana_chan said was what I was hoping happened too lol XDDD Hopefully it ends happily but if not, *tissues* HAHA

JunToshi XDDD Seems alot lately lol big grin
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 28, 2008 4:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

hehe...well im still working on how the story will goes and i cant comment much of it ne...XDXD wink
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 2:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

(Chapter Sixteen)

“Sho-kun” Shin waved animatedly when he saw Sho walked inside the coffee house.

The two of them had agreed to meet for breakfast today as Shin said that he will not be around Tokyo for three days starting tomorrow as he had to go for family business trip.

Sho walked toward Shin and then sit down.

“So have you ordered?” Sho asked straight away and Shin nodded.

“I have ordered for you too. It is mocha latte that you like right? Shin asked.

Sho looked at Shin confused. As far as he remembered he never mentioned what flavour he liked to Shin.

“How do you know that?”

Shin grinned. “Well I don’t actually. I just trust my feeling. Somehow I just feel that it is your favourite” Shin admitted.

Sho nodded, even though he is still a bit sceptical about the answer he just decided to accept it.

As the two of them are enjoying their breakfast, suddenly Sho’s cells rings. He looks at the name of the caller and its written Matsujun.

“Hold on” He said to Shin as he answered his phone.

“Sho, Johnny-san wants to meet the four of us at 11am” Jun said.

“Ehhhh” Sho was surprised as he looked at his watch. The clock already shows 10.15am.

“Why? Are you at somewhere else now?” Jun asked after he heard Sho’s gasped.

“I’m having breakfast with Shin now” Sho answered casually as he forgets that he never mentioned Shin to any of the members.

Jun was quiet at the other side at the mentioned of Shin’s name.

“I hope you can make it by 11am. I got to go now as I still have to contact Nino and Ohno” then Jun hung up before Sho could even reply.

“I need to go now Shin” Sho said, apologetically as he stands up.

Shin looked at him and nodded.

“I had some ad hoc meeting with my boss. Sorry for the quick meeting and you take care as I will see you again after three days right” Sho said, as he was ready to go.

Shin nodded.

“Okay, I’ll see you later then” He said

Sho waved his good bye and walked out from the coffee house.

Shin watched Sho until he was out of sight before continued his breakfast. Then his eyes caught something.

“Ehhhhh…” he exclaimed as he took the black wallet at the sit where Sho sat before.

“Sho-kun dropped his wallet” Shin whispered “I need to return to him as all his cards are in here”

As he was looking for Sho working place address in the wallet, suddenly his eyes caught on picture inside the wallet.

Shin looked closer and then when he saw one of the guys in the picture, suddenly he become angry.

“So this is why he be friend with me huh…..”

(SHIDA said: I wrote this chapter when I’m on a bus on my way to my hometown for government test the next day. Instead of worrying about the exam I care more about the fic..haha…well I hope the story is getting to the answer you are looking for..XD and thanks in advance for reading..XD
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 2:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Shin looked closer and then when he saw one of the guys in the picture, suddenly he become angry.

“So this is why he be friend with me huh…..”

oh no no no no! T__T misunderstandingggg! T___T

i hope he won't be really really mad :(
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 8:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

shida - ^I make a little bit change of your title cos' of standard needs..Thanks!
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 9:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

(Chapter Seventeen)

Shin walked inside the building, with mixture of angry and sad feelings.

Once he entered the building, he ignored the double stares that were given to him whenever he passed the nearby person as he somehow knew the reason why they all stared at him. He hated the way they stared and it increased his angered toward Sho as he dragged his cap closer to cover his half face and adjusted his specs. Deep inside his feeling now he feels that Sho had betrayed their friendship that had been developed for two months already.

He kept walking until he arrived at the door written Arashi on the door plaque.

He knocked the door hard. After three knocks, the door opened showing a boy with big round black eyes with his hair cover his left eyes.

“Can you knock a bit slow and it is annoying!” the boy snapped.

“Is Sakurai-kun here?” Shin asked, ignoring the remarks as he is also not in the mood to handle a boy.

“Why do you want to meet him?” the boy asked, trying to piss him.

“Look boy, I’m in a hurry now so can you please call him NOW!”

The boy looked at him surprised.

“I’m not a boy as I’m already 25 years old and I had a name and the name is Ninomiya Kazunari!”

He stepped closer to Shin as he met eye to eye with Shin and to get a better view of the guy who dared to call him boy.

Then Shin realised something in the boy eyes. He suddenly saw somehow Ninomiya’s eyes had turned soft and become teary. Somehow Shin understands why he become like that as he had the same stares the rest are giving him when he set foot into this building.

Before he could open his mouth, suddenly Sho appeared.

“Nino, whats is…..” Sho stopped when he saw Shin.

“Shin…..” he said, a bit surprised to see him “What are you doing here?” he asked as he pulled the stunned Ninomiya aside.

“I just want to return this” Shin said, bitterly as he handed the wallet to Sho.

Sho recognised the tone of anger in Shin voice asked “What’s wrong?”

“This is!” Shin said as he opened the wallet and shows the picture.

Sho looked at picture pointed by Shin.

“Now I understand why you be friend with me! Let me tell you, me and him is not the same person!” Shin said and then walked away.

Sho stands there dumbfounded. When he had regained his composure he realised Shin was out of the building.

Sho looked at the picture and then sighed. Tear starts to well in his eyes as he whispered “Shin, you and Aiba are the same person…..”


(SHIDA said: I have nothing to comment as I am now thinking hard for the next chapter.. some mysteries(THE ONE THAT YOU GUYS BEEN GUESSING ALL THE TIME) had been revealed…XD and p.s: the next chapter will b very short..)
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 9:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

P.s: i think the recent chapter i posted above WILL MAKE YOU GUYS HAPPY!! whistle
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 6:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wah! I don't know why, either cuz I just woke up or what, but

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Then Shin realised something in the boy eyes. He suddenly saw somehow Ninomiya’s eyes had turned soft and become teary.

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Sho looked at the picture and then sighed. Tear starts to well in his eyes as he whispered “Shin, you and Aiba are the same person…..”

made me tear ~sigh~

Nino and Aiba-chan friends for life T__T So that makes me really sad but wahhh HE is Aiba-chan?! *wahh~* Of course if he was, Sho-kun would pick up on it XD
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