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[Complete]I Promise(Ohno and OC) UPDATED. Chapter12
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 9:45 am    Post subject: [Complete]I Promise(Ohno and OC) UPDATED. Chapter12 Reply with quote

Hi. This is my First Fan Fic , so i hope you'll enjoy It. I did my best to make it sounds interesting. Obviously, the main Character is Ohno.
Just to inform you, Chapter 1 - 3 is a flash back. smile lets get to the story!

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I PROMISE...

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[CHAPTER 1]

2001


Standing by the window after the Charity Concert at the Orphanage by Arashi,
Ohno just watched the other members anjoy the after party at the Orphanage.

"So what's up with you?" Aiba said after coming out of the blue.
"Nothing..." Ohno smiled smoothly. "Great party Ne Ohno-kun? It's nice making the orphans happy." Aiba placed his glass of fruit juice on the table.

"Thank you so much for coming!" The voice startled the two of them .
"Oh, Nishi-san, of course, no problem. It was great being here." Aiba replied happily.
Nishi-san , who was the director and manager of the orphanage happily talked with Aiba as if they were old friends.
The both of them were engrossed wth their conversation.

Ohno in the other hand wasn't interested in the conversation and left the both of them to go out at the garden which is now covered woth Snow.
As Ohno steeped outside, he noticed a little girl out in the garden playing with snow.
She had snow-white fluffy cheecks, Long black hair and beautiful big brown eyes.

"Ah~ she must be making a snowman..." seeing the girl happily played alone in the snow.
"Why is she playing alone..?" he thought to himself.
The little girl caught his attention.

The little girl, who noticed Ohno's existance warmly smiled at him "Konbanwa"
"Ah~Konbanwa." Ohno happily replied.
"Snowman..." said the litlle girl. "Hai?" Ohno replied curiously.
"Snowman..his head keeps falling off....." Ohno smiled and giggled to himself. "Ah, would you like me to help?" Ohno offered.

"Un!" the girl replied happily. Her eyes where shinig as bright as the stars that night.
"Come let me halp you." Ohno sat next to her. Helping her with the snowman.
The two happily made a snowman together.
Giggling, laughing such enjoyment the both were having.


"Why are you out here alone?" asked Ohno curiously while patting snow to make a snowball. "I have no friends." She replied.
"Oh, but what about your parents? they must be worried.
Let's go in." Ohno stood up. Walking to the entrance, he stopped. "Aren't you coming?" Ohno turned back.

"I don't have a mummy or a daddy. I'm an Orphan. I live here to wait for mummy and daddy to come bring me home." the little girl looked up in the sky, seeing the stars.
"Nishi-san said i should wait for someone to come to be my mummy or daddy."
Ohno sat next to the girl. He saw loneliness in her eyes.

"What's your name?" Ohno asked. "People here call me Fumiko." The girl replied without taking her eyes off the the sky.
"That's a beautiful name..." Ohno slowly complimented her.

"I don't like it. That name." Ohno was suprised with her answer, kindly asked "Why?".
"I wan't a name my mummy and daddy will give me." she said with her eyes closed."Do you remember your name?" Asked Ohno. "No" the girl replied helding back tears.
"Poor thing..." Ohno thought to himself. The girl leaned next to Ohno.
Her smalll body was cold. He looked passionately at the small girl.
"What's your name?" The small girl suddenly asked.

"My name is Satoshi." he answered while patting the small girls head which is as big as his own palm.
"Satoshi-san..." the girl called out for him softly.
"Yes?" Ohno replied with a caring voice while holding her in his arms
like a child of his own.

"Can i call you otou-san?..." Ohno was suprised with her request.
"Why?" he curiosly asked.
"Nishi-san said a mom or a dad are really warm people. Especially when they hug you. Satoshi otou-san is so warm.." The little girl cuddled Ohno.

Ohno was very thouched.He lied down on the pile of snow "Yea..you can call me that.." The little girl lied down next to him, cuddling under him arms.
Ohno held her really tight. Not wanting to let her go.
Ohno and the little girl looked up in the sky, star gazing, while holding on toward each other as if nothing could bring them apart...



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[Can you feel the connection?
That's the end of Chapter 1! clapping
I think i cried.. cry =.=' ha ha ha
i hope you like it! comments appreciated.]
Sorry for spelling mistakes or grammar errors!
See you in chapter 2!


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PostPosted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 11:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

So here's chapter two.
this is still a flash back

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CHAPTER 2



After a few hours of enjoyment, the other arashi members realised that their dear Riida was missing.
"Have any of you seen Oh-chan?" Nino worriedly ask Sho and Jun.
"I thought i saw him with aiba." Replied Jun.
"Yeah. they were by the window" Sho continued while stuffing himself up with food.


Nino hurriedly left in search of Aiba. "Ahh~ Riida went outside" Aiba happily answered Nino."In the cold??
Its Snowing out there!" Nino angrily scolded Aiba. Nino looked out at the window.
He saw 2 figures lying on a pile of snow.

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Ohno and Fumiko was lying on the pile of snow, star gazing through the night. Ohno kept on talking to Fumiko.
Telling her jokes and stories untill he realised she was fast asllep next to him.
Hugging him tightly on the arm.
"Kawaii~~" Ohno talked to himself. "a..Chii~!" Fumiko let out a cute sneeze.
"She must be cold." Ohno slowly unwraped his scarf that was hanging onto his neck and slowly wrapped it around Funiko's little body.
"I never realised my scarf was so big. It could actually wrap her up. Like a rice ball." Ohno smiled to himself.

Then he continnued lying on the pile of snow. Slowy closing his eyes... slowly falling into a deep sleep...

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"Ah there's Riida!!" Nino pointed out the window.
He dashed out the buliding to get to Ohno. "Chotto Matte!!" Aiba yelled out while chasing after Nino.

From far Nino can see Ohno's Orange hair. "Did he faint?" question came flying into Nino's head.
"Riida! Riida!" Nino called out for him. Ohno who was fast asleep did not answer to Nino. Nino then saw hid leader soundasleep.
"On a pile of snow? Riida...you can sleep just anywhere can't you?" Nino laughed at his silly Leader.

"I wanna sleep..go wake Sho-kun first.." Ohno mumbled in his sleep.
Nino laughed at him while trying to wake him up. "Nino! don't run off like that!" Aiba wafted in, yelling out to Nino, Panting and breathing real hard.

Ohno was startled by the two who was making noise.
"Oh great! Aiba you woke him up". "Me??? you were the one waking him up!" Aiba protested.
"SHHHH!!!!! You're gonna wake Fumi-chan up!!"
Ohno angrily whispered to the both of them.

The two of them looked at each other curiously. "Fumi-chan?.." nino asked curiously. "Who's that? " Aiba continued.
"She's my daugh..." Ohno stopped. "what was i thinking? saying she's my daughter?!!" Ohno scolded himself in his toughts. "Your??? whaa..?" Nino looked at Ohno confused.
"She's one of the orphans who's living here in this orphanage." Ohno answered while pointing to The small body that was lying on the pile of snow.

"Waah~~kawaii!" Aiba said out-loud while looking at her fluffy cheecks. "She's all wrapped up like a rice ball!! Ohno-kun, isn't this your Scarf?" .
"Ah! Yea... Its mine. i just thought she might get a cold " Ohno answered."Can you both stop making noise??!" Ohno stood up and pulled Nino and Aiba's ear. "Oww! owww!!" Aiba and Nino cried out in pain.

"tou-san...." Fumi-chan's eyes opened. She looked around looking for her 'Satoshi otou-san.' As she saw Ohno standing, she stood up but fell on her back because she was wrapped up and it was hard for her to move.

Ohno slowly helped Fumiko get unwrapped. Fumiko finally freed , stood up and held onto Ohno's jeans while the other hand holding his scarf.
"You can have the scarf Fumi-chan."Ohno warmly smiled.
Fumiko happily smiled back. She streched her arms towards Ohno showing she wanted to be lifted up. "Hai~" Ohno carried her gently.

Fumiko held on tight onto Ohno's neck and cuddeled.
"Aww... she's soo cute! You two are so close! Just like a momma Koala and Baby koala!!" Aiba excitedly jumped around. "Wait...i thought i heard her said ''Tou-san" to you. You're her dad..?
i don't remember you getting married... I thought you said she lived in this orphanage..." Nino looked confused.
"Ah... that...its a long story..."
"Well then, tell us every detail!" Aiba requested Ohno.

*****Explaination going on between Ohno towards Aiba and Nino*****

"Uwaa~~ that was so cute of her ne? Nino-kun?" "Hai....so deseu ne.." Nino replied to the overly excited Aiba. "Anou... you're not really adoptting her right? I mean ..if she sees you leave after calling you 'Otou-san' wont she.." the troubled look on Ohno's face stopped Nino from continuing.
Ohno sighed softly, thinking about what Nino just have said. Maybe he was right about what he said... The awkward silence is really getting to Ohno.
Aiba was feeling awkward as he looked into Ohno's troubled face and Nino's regretted eyes.
"Ah! Its getting late and cold! Lets go back inside. Anyways the guests are starting to leave." Aiba tried his best to stop the awkward silence.
"You're right Aiba-kun. Anyways Fumiko fell asleep and she needs to go back to sleep in her room."Ohno headed for the door leaving Nino and Aiba behind following him from the back.

As the three was inside, they saw Nishi-san looking worried. "Ah~ There you are, Fumiko-chan!" Nishi-san headed over to the three while pointing out to Fumiko-chan."Where'd you found her?"

"Outside." Ohno replied . "Again?? She always goes outside and sits there from morning until night." Nishi looked at Fumiko who sleeping worriedly.

"What does she do outside?" Aiba looked at Nishi-san waiting for a reply.
"She keeps waiting for someone. She won't tell me who."
"Owh.. Ohno-kun found her outside playing with snow."Aiba explained.

"Oh..it's fine as long as she's back. Ohno-kun give her to me, i need to put her back into her room." Ohno felt heavy-hearted to let his dear Fumi-chan go into Nishi-sans arms.He tried his best trying to let her go, but when he did, Fumiko will hug him back not wanting to let go.

As when Nishi-san got closer to Fumiko and was about to carry her, Ohno without realising backed off a few steps showing he dosen't want her to take Fumiko away.

"Doshita no? Ohno-san?" Nishi-san was confused with what Ohno just did.
She looked at him with a confused face.

Ohno bowed down infront of Nishi-san, his face facing the floor. His action suprised the Nino ,Aiba and Nishi-san.

"Eh? Ohno-san?"
"ONEGAI! PLEASE LET ME ADPOT HER!! ONEGAI" begging without realising, he really shocked Nino and Aiba.
Ohno looked suprised himself. Just realising what he just said and did, a major silence came...

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Thats the end of Chapter 2. I hope you enjoyed it!!
To know what happened next wait for cahppie 3!!
leave me your comments and thoughts~
forgive me for spelling errors, or grammar mistakes!
Til next time!!


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PostPosted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 2:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Naya-chan!! this is such sweet story!! i like it!! <3
aww ohno so protective! i like that side of ohchan its so sweet!!
chappie 3?? ^____^ *waiting* ♥
i really loved the "Waah~~kawaii!" from aiba-chan!! haha! totally aiba thing to do!!
oh may i ask, how old is fumi-chan?? [i hope i didnt just miss it if you said it --"]
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 8:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

IchibaSatoshiChan: Thx for reading! Fumiko is 3 years old here. Ya, i like Ohno and aiba here! Here's chappie 3!

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Finally Chapter 3!
Enjoy

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CHAPTER 3




"Eh??" Nishi-san looked suprised at Ohno.

Ohno: Eh?
Nishi:Ehh?
Ohno: Anou...
Arashi: Eeeeeeehh????!!!

Ohno stood up properly, looking at everyones suprised face.
Both Jun and Sho where there and they heard it.
Their eyes wide open. "You want to what???!"

"A..i..what..what i mean was..." being shocked himself, Ohno didnt know what to say.
Everyone started talking to Ohno. Ohno, not knowing who to listen to started to have a headache. "Urusaii!" Ohno yelled out. "One by one.. you're giving me a headache!" "Oh-chan..." Nino looked at Ohno seriously.
"I know that you've grown attached to her, but your only 21 years old...still too young. Who's gonna support you? you don't have a wife. Think about."

"Yeah..and you have no experience..and..what will Johnny say if he found out?? and the Tabloids?" Jun continued, looking into Ohno's eye.
"I'll..i'll keep it a secret..and..and.." Ohno was stopped by Sho who held his shoulders. "Anou..Ohno-san..are you sure?"Sho wanted to know how serious Ohno was , knowing that this is an important matter. Ohno could just nodded silently.

Sho turned to Nishi-san who looked suprised and speechless. "Nishi-san..." everyone looked at her. The attention now was on Nishi-san.
"A..a...are ..you..i mean..Are you sure?" Nishi-san was waiting for confirmation from Ohno. Anyway, thi is a serious matter.

"Yea...i..a.. but.." before he could even finish his sentence, Sho inturrupted."Well thats you answer Nishi-san. If he's sure, he IS SURE. " "Yea, but what about the support...and johnys and tabloids..?" Aiba ask Sho. "We'll keep it a secret from Johnnys! and when the tabloids are out about this, just say she's a relative and why can't WE just support him instead? i mean its not wrong.If there's any problem, Ohno-kun you can rely on me." Sho looked straight into Ohno's eyes.

The attention is now on Ohno. "Sho-kun...really? i mean.." "Ok!" Nishi-san said out loud "I'll get papers" Everyone looked at Nishi-san. "What? Ohno-san is seriuos right? I can see great determination in his eyes. Why not give him a chance?" Nishi-san said looking qiute happy."Well if he's sure..you got my support Ohno" Jun said "Me too!" Aiba happily look at Ohno Now its Nino who was silent. "Well...if everyone says ok...i guess...its a OK" Nino looked at Ohno.
"Really? Were in this together?" Ohno's eyes shined.

"Indeed we are." Sho smiled to Ohno. "Arigatou!!!! Sho-kun thanks for the support and not doubting me!" "Well, Ohno-san you stay here. I'll get documents." Nishi-san left the others with Ohno. "Waa~ Youre finally getting a kid without 'Doing it' Huh?" Aiba let out a little tease.

"Doing what?" ohno did not understand what Aiba was talking about. "You know...se..."
Nino smacked Aiba's head before he could finish what he was saying. "Itaiii~~!!!" Aiba whinned.

Ohno's face turned bright red and his cheeks felt warm after understanding the message Aiba was try to telll him.
"Stop perverting his mind with your dirty thoughts Aiba!!" Nino gave a nasty glare to Aiba.

"Hai~! The documents and papers are here!!"Nishi-san pulled away Ohno from the others. "Ah, Hai! what must i do with it?" Ohno totally confused. "Read the documents then sign the papers. thats it.
Let me bring Fumiko too her room. while you're at it . Ok?" Nishi-san took Fumiko away and left Ohno to his 'Reading' .

*******10 minutes later*******

"Are you done yet? Ohno-san?".
"Not yet...im confused here..."
"Oh that...It means this.."
"Oh ..Ok! Im done. "
"Finally! it took you a lot af time just reading it!" Jun teased Ohno.
"Sorry. Its not my fault! its so hard to understand!!" Ohno let out a pout.

"Ok , Ohno-san. You just sign here...here...and here...Oh! and here too." Nishi-san pointing out important rules to Ohno making him sure about everything.
"Hai~ Done!" Ohno smiled happily.
"So..you can come here again tomorrow to pick her up. Oh yes, have you thought of a name for her? Or do you want to stick with Fumiko? "
"Umm...i think i wanna give her a new name."
"Have you decided?"
"Yea.. but i'll keep it fo myself..at the moment."

"Look at Ohno and Nishi-san..i wonder what are they talking about.." Nino obviously wanted to know. "Waa~ Ohno is going to have a daughter...we'll be UNCLES!" Aiba happily said what he did out loud.

"Ok! we can go home now!!" Ohno happily skipped to the entrance. He felt his hand being gripped by someone. "Ohno-kun...." Ohno turned around finding himself being gripped by Sho. "Nani?" he answered. "Umm..what about your mom..i almost forgot about her..." Sho was nervous. "Ah....i forgot too... how am i going to tell her."
"You'll think of a way.." Jun winked at Ohno.

*******after arrivnig home*******

"Tadaima~!"
"Okaeri~! You're finally home!" Ohno's mother greeted him.
'what am i or how am i supposed to say it??' Ohno just stood there looking at his mother.
"what?" His mother responded to Ohno's spaced out stare towards her.
"umm..i have something to tell you..."
"Ok...what is it?"
"Itss....its.."
"You must be tired..go get some rest.."
"No. I have to tell you tonight..."
"Ok..what is it?"
"Aaa..you see..i.."
"Have a girlfriend??!" His mom's eye shined.
"No..its just that i.."
"Have a Kid? Hahahaah .. sorry that was a joke!" His mom laughed.

Ohno looked at his mom suprised.
"What? was it something i said?" His mom looked curious towards Ohno.
"Bout that..."
"Don't tell me!!!!" His mom was looking at terror
"Tell what??!!"
"You made someone pregnant and she has YOUR child??!!!" His mom broke into tears.
"i don't know if im happy or sad toshi..."
"Eeehhh!! No!!!!! never!!" Ohno immediately denied his mom.
"Ohh..Ok then. So whats this about?
""Umm...its still about a child.." Ohno looks scared..thinking about what his mom's reaction's going to be.
"Don't worry toshi...i' wont be mad."
"Ok..Imm...im...i am...."
"You are??"
"I'm adpoting a Child!!" Ohno finally said it. There! Finally he felt no burden.
"You what?" His mom was speechless.
"I..adopted a child..."
"Toshi...you're only 21..."
"But.."
"Don't worry..im not mad. Im happy. Don't worry you'll have my support." his mom smiled at Ohno, showing she wasnt mad at all.
"You'll support me?.
"Of course! i've always wanted you to have a child..although i wanted you to have a wife too..."
"Arigatou..Mom.." Ohno hugged his mom.
'this went better than i planned' ohno thought t himself.
"So..when is he or she coming?" Ohno's mom winked to him
"Umm..i'll pick her up tomorrow."
"HER? Its a girl~!? I wanted a girl! She must be special ne Toshi?" his mom hugged him real tight
"oowww....yea.."

*******The next Day*******

"Ohno-san!! You're finally here!! Fumiko is waiting in the living room." Nishi-san greeted Ohno warmly as he arrived.
"Does she know im adopt her?"
"No. i didnt tell her. She kept on saying "I want toshi-tou-san!!" and not anyone else." Nishi-san laughed.
"Ooo.." Ohno was really happy.

"Here walk this way..follow me."
"Hai."

Ohno followed Nishi-san to the Living Room. He then saw his dearest Fumiko waiting on the sofa. "Fumiko..." Fumiko turned her head around. wondering who could be calling her. "Toshi-tou-san!!!" She leaped out of the sofa in happines. She ran straight to Ohno.
"Fumiko! i missed you. Do you knw im gonna be your New daddy?" Ohno happily carried her.
"Hontou~!?" her face changed from being sad to Happy.
"Hai. and...from now on..you'll no longer be 'Fumiko.' " Ohno smiled cheeky-ly.
"Ee?" Fumiko replied.
"From now on You'll be 'Ritsuka' which means snow. i hope you like it ! i thought of it the whole night!!"
"Hai!!! Daisuki!!" Ritsuka hugged Ohno real tight.

"Well you can bring her home now Ohno-san. She your's." Nishi-san happily announced Ohno and Ritsuka 'Father and Child.'
"Lets go home Ritsuka! Your luggage is in the Taxi!
"Hai~~! Tou-san!"

The two walked to the Taxi holding hands. then Ohno whispered into Ritsuka's ear.. "i'll always be there when you need me. I'll never let you go."


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End of chappie 3!!! i hope you enjoyed it!!!
Forgive my spelling mistakes~~ and grammar errors!

Till next time! See you in chapter 4!

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*comments appreciated! wink


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Thx for reading this far! not really since its only chappie 4

Enjoy~!

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CHAPTER 4





7 years later....

2008



Ohno woke upfrom his sleep, his body muscles
hurting from the dance practice he had the other day. I'm so tired.... i even had to run home because it rained....
Ohno turned to other side of the bed. "Eh? Ri-chan?" he found his daughter sleeping next to him. "how'd you end up in my room?"

"It was raining heavily last night she got scared and she went up to your room. You know she's afraid of lighting." Ohno's mom stepped into his room.
"Hurry up and wake up Papa toushi~!" His mom giggled.
"Uuun..im so tired.." Ohno moaned. Lying back onto his bed.
"i want to sleep with Ri-chan~"let me sleep in.." He started to dose off.
"Oi~ Toshi-kun you have work today remember? Anyway Ri-chan has school to go to." His mom gave him a glare.

"I wanna skip school...i wanna sleep in with Tou-chan.." Ritsuka woke up from her sleep.
"We wanna sleep~" Ohno and Ritsuka both said together.
"Ri-chan..you have to go to school. And stop being as lazy as your father..." Ohno's mom tried her best to pull both Ohno and Ritsuka out of bed.

"Hai~" Ohno carried Ritsuka and got off the bed. "Hey Ritsuka..you haven't been growing much have you? You're light!" Ohno giggled while talking in a teasing tone.
"Its not my fault im a shorty..." Ritsuka's face turned pink because of her father's comment towards her.
"There's nothing to be embarresed about..hahaha" Ohnokept on teasing his little Ritsuka-chan.
"Baa-chan~~! Tou-san is teasing me!" Ritsuka whinned to her grandmother who is
Ohno's mother.
"Why don't you two just stop with the morning fuzzy father-daughter-love and go and take your bath already? i've seen it almost everyday." Ohno's mom tidied Ohno's messy bed and left for the kitchen to make breakfast.

"So what do you want to have for lunch later?" Ohno grabbed his towel getting ready for a bath. "Butnits still morning tou-chan.." Ritsuka curiously looked at Ohno.
"I know. but i'll be off work early today. We can have lunch together." Ohno winked to his daughter. Ritsuka kept on thinkng with the cute spaced out faced she has just like Ohno.
Ohno gave out a little giggle looking at his little girl spacing out just like him.
Kaa-chan was right. We do act alike!. Ohno smiled to himself.
"Why are you smiling tou-chan?" Ritsuka inturrupted Ohno and his thoughts.

"Nothing..." He smiled at her. "So, have you thought of it?" Ohno looked at Ritsuka expecting a reply from her.
"Fried rice." She replied.
"Fried rice?"
"Yup. Fried rice!"
"Ok.We'll have Fried Rice!!"
"Yaaayyy~~" Ritsuka jumped happpily.
"You go and get a bath in the other toilet. I'll be taking mine here" Ohno stepped into the toilet and shut the door.
"Hai~" he can Ritsuka walked out of his room.

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"Ohno-kun~~~" Aiba run towards Ohno who just entered the dance studio.
"Ohayo...Aiba-kun" Ohno lazily replied to Aiba who was always hyper.
"What's wrong Ohno-kun?" Aiba put on a worried face.
"Nothing...im just tired from yesterday's practise."
"See what happened when you choreograph your moves to be soo complicated." Jun patted on Ohno's sholuders.
"Not..that....the steps is just to easy for me...just my muscles can't handle them..anyways i ran home last night because it rained..." Ohno let out a yawn.
"Whatever the case, we have to start now. Ohno you have to lead remember?" Sho inturrupted.
"Hai~" Ohno put down his stuff and put on his dancing shoe.

"Ok, From the TOP. 1...2...1..2...3..4..!" Ohno insturected.


'hashiridase hashiridase asu wo mukae ni yukou
kimi dake no oto wo kikaseteyo zenbu kanjiteruyo
tomenaide tomenaide ima wo ugokasu kimochi
donna ni chiisa na tsubomi demo hitotsu dake no Happiness'


Everyone followed Ohno from behind. Time passes and soon it was already Lunch time.

"Bye minna~ i have to go now!" Ohno waved goodbye to the others and headed to the exit.
"Chotto! Aren't you going to eat lunch with us?" Ohno stopped when he heard Aiba.
"Nope. Im eating out today!"
"With Ritsuka-chan?" Sho asked.
"Ah, Hai~ i'll be picking her up from school. Then were gonna have lunch together."
"Don't forget your diguise Ohno-kun!" Nino instructed.
"Hai~! Ja!!"
"Tell Ritsuka that Arashi-tou-san said hi!! Bring her here tomorrow ne Ohno-kun?" Aiba happily waved goodbye to Ohno
"Hai!!" Ohno left for the entrance.

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Ahh..i'm so lucky! Good thing the chef there gave me extra fried rice! i didnt know she recognise me even in diguise! Ohno wondered around looking for Ritsuka's school.
i can't find it...that reminds me..i've never been to her school for the past 2 years.. Ohno slapped his forehead. BAKA! how can you not remeber your daughters school. i'll go home first maybe kaa-chan could tell me.

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"Oh she dosen't go to school anymore." His mom told Ohno while cooking lunch.
"Whhaaaattt?? How long has it been since she hasn't gone to school?" Ohno was suprised with what his mom just said.
"one year now..Didn't you know? She's seeing a private tutor now." His mom calmly explained.
"No i did not not know! A private Turtor? why?"
"Ask Ritsuka herself. Are going to eat lunch here?"
"No. i was planning to eat at the park with Ritsuka."
"Do you want the address to her Private Tutors home?"
"Yea..yes please."
"Ok..hold on. If you reach there tell her you're picking Ritsuka ok?"
"Ok.."

Her? Oo..i guess the tutor must be a girl.. Ohno sat on the sofa while waiting for his mom.
"Here. Don't get lost. It's actually nearby." Ohno's mom waved goodbye as he took his leave.

****after wondering around and got lost several times****

Aaahhh...i can't find it!!!. Ohno squad down. Where can i find this apartmment??!! Ohno stood up and sat atthe nearby bench.
After taking a break. Ohno stood up to continue his search. Where could it be..

Ohno realised there was a buliding next to where he was standing. eeh..i never realised it there. Roux..Roux..villa? he stood quite for a while. Roux Villa! that's the Apartment!! Yatta~ i found it!

Ohno entered the building. He walked in being carefull with the unfuimiliar surroundings. He wondered around asking for directions to the tutors house. After wondering for nearly two hours on the streets and in the building. He finally found it The house. It wa nicely decorated.
With a small painting on the door. Plants next to the door. It was such a cozy home.

Ohno was really nervous just by standing there.

here goes....

Ding-Dong
Ding-Dong


The door opened....

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Thx for reading!! Finally i finished chappie 4! clapping
it was real long though...
Hope you're entertained and keep on reading! Wohoo!
Till next time! wink


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PostPosted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 11:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

ohno's so sweet(refering to adopting the cute lil girl) and he has no sense of direction(like me, lol), i will be waiting patiently here....hekekekekeke. *humming ritsuka, ritsuka*
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 9:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

DarkLaharl: Hey! Thx for reading~! Her's Chappie 5~!

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Yya~! i've reached Chapter 5! about time
Hai...

DOZO!

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CHAPTER 5






"Hai?" A girl opened the door. She was fair , with big brown eyes, long hair and cute red pouty lips. Her face was filled with paint.

kawaii... Ohno stood there speechless.
"Hai? May i help you?"the girl made Ohno broke from his thoughts.

"Ah! Sumimasen! I'm here to pick up Ritsuka-chan..." Ohno could only look down to the floor. He was nervous, especially not knowing the girl.
This better be the right house!!! If its not, i'll embarras my self!!Ohno shut his eye real thight hoping he'd gone to the right house.

"and you are?" She asked Ohno politely.
"I'm her father..." He nervously answered.
"Oh, if that is the case, come on in!" She greeted Ohno warmly.

Ohno walked into her house. Waaa.. its so preety! Ohno looked around the apartment. Her walls were in a beige coluor and decorated with paintings. And lots of clay scluptures and small metal figures were on a shelf.
Did she made all this? Ohno thought to himself.
"Umm..you can wait in the living room. Ritsuka is in there." She pointed Ohno where the living room was. Ohno nodded silently.
Before he could take a step foward, the girl held his hands."Ah, Is tea ok?" She asked him
"Huh?" Ohno confusingly looked at her.
"I mean would you like tea?" The girl just gave a samll giggle because of Ohno's reaction and her mistake of confusing him.

Ohno stared at her adorable laughing face. He felt his face turned red as his cheeks was starting to warm up.
"I'll be in the kitchen." The girl left Ohno.

Ohno walked to the living room. He founed his little Ritsuka painting with waercolours on her face.
"Tou-chan?" Ritsuka looked at Ohno
"Yo!" Ohno showed a peace sign.
"Waaa~~ You're here!!" Ritsuka hugged Ohno.

"Ritsuka-chan~ Don't hug him when your all messy! You might dirty your dad's clothes" The girl Ohno just met was walking into the living room holding a tray with 3 cups of tea and 3 slices of shortcake.
"Ara kaa-chan~~" Ritsuka let go of Ohno and ran to the girl, helping her with the tray.
"Waa~~ Shortcake!" Ritsuka's eyes beamed , shinig showing that she's excited.
The girl smiled. "Ah, im so sorry for not introducing myself. My name is Ara. Im your daughters Private tutor and her previous home room teacher in school."

"Ohh..are you still a teacher of the same school?" Ohno sat down next to Ristuka who was already eating the shortcake.
"Ooo..about that...i got fired. It seems im not much of a teacher. Im more to a playful teacher. Well, thats what they tell me." Ara giggled to herself.
"Oh, please have some shortcake. As for you, Ritsuka wash you hands and face before eating it!" Ara insturcted Ritsuka. "Hai~" Ritsuka stood up going to the toilet. She turned around "Ara kaa-chan~ you have to wash your face too! It's filled with paint" Ritsuka said in a teasing tone.

Ara's face turned red "Ah! Silly me! I forgot! Sorry for making you see me in such state." She apologised to Ohno.
"Its ok." Ohno smiled. "I think it was kind of cute"... he whiispered softly.
"What was that?" Ara looked at Ohno, wanting him to repeat what he said.
"Nothing." Ohno's face turned red. He felt his cheecks warm.

"Ara kaa-chan~~" Ritsuka was calling from the toilet.
"Coming~" Ara was about to take a step when her hand was pulled by Ohno.
"Yes?" Ara turned around.
"She called you kaa-chan?" Ohno looked at her seriously.
"Ah, about that...I'm sorry if it ofended you!" Ara kept apologising to Ohno again and again. Her face turned pinki-sh.

"Oh, No. Im not mad or anything. I just wanted to know why." Ohno looked down.
"Umm..ok. Let me explain.." She sat next to Ohno.
Ohno felt his heartbeat go faster, his face turning rea and his cheeks feeling warm.
why are you freaking out satoshi?? she's just sitting next to you!! Ohno scolded himself in his thoughts.

"Are you ok? Your face is turning red.." Ara put her face closely to Ohno making him even more nervous.
"Ah, Nothing" Ohno looked away. "About Ritsuka calling you..." Ohno tried to change the topic.

"Oh yes. That. This sounds wierd but i find it to ba a sweet memory!" She giggled to herself. Ohno was just observing her.

"Well, it was when she's still in school and same goes for me. It was recess and it was raining. I saw Ritsuka-chan outside through the window. She just sat under a small shaded hut nearby the school and because it was raining heavily,i ran outside to bring her back in. When i reached the small hut, i can see that she was scared. I sat next to her comforting her. Telling her everything was alright. Then she leaned on me. We then had a conversation and such. Suddenly she ask me if she could call me Okaa-san. Because i was curious, i ask her why. She told me its because i was somehow 'warm' i felt touched and happy so i told her she can call me Kaa-chan." Ara looked at Ohno who was staring while listening to her story. "Well, roughly thats like how it happened."

Ohno smiled and giggled covering his mouth. Hahaha i guess she is still the same from back then! i never thought she'd ask her to be her 'Kaa-chan'
Ohno couldn't take how funny the story was because it happened to him aswell.
Ara's face turned pink-ish when she saw Ohno giggling."Was it that funny?" Ara covered her face.
"No..hahaah its not funny. Im like this beacause i remembered somthing." Ohno triend his best to make Ara feel better.
"What is that?" Ara looked at Ohno's happy smiling face.
"She did that to me too. The asking to be 'Kaa-chan' thing. Except she asked me if she could call me 'tou-chan' ."
"Ee? She asked you? Why? i thought she's your daughter. She dosent have to ask." Ara looked curiously at Ohno.

"Ohh. that. It was because..."Before Ohno could finished Ritsuka inturrupted.
"I was Adpoted " Ritsuka said while smiling and sitting next to Ohno.
"Yea. That. She's my adopted daughter." Ohno happily continued while putting his arms around Ritsuka.

"Eeeh??" Ara was speechless.

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Thats the end for chapter 5!
I hope you were entertained! clapping

Yea. you could tell that Ohno kind fo fell in love with Ara.
In chapter 6, Ohno and Ritsuka finally explained to Ara bout the adoption and Ohno ask her out on a date. Heart

Till then! bye!bye!

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Forgive me for spelling errors and grammar mistakes!
Comments are apreciated! it'll make my day.
Sorry if it was boring! I typed this around 2:35 a.m untill 3:35 a.m. Mann...im sleepy... sleeping

This was last minute..


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PostPosted: Tue Sep 22, 2009 5:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

ehehheekekekekeke, cant wait for the next chapter..ask her out on a date..woohoo~~~, lol
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 2:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

hey Naya-chan!! aww this story just continues to get sweeter ne!
i love it ♥ i really love how Ritsuka-chan space out like Oh-chan!
haha! cho kawaii yo! and i love the whole 'morning fuzzy father-daughter love'
so sweet seems like very ohno type moment haha!

wahh cannot wait for next chapter!! *awaiting eagerly*
a date with Ara-chan ne? uwa~ ^_____^
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DarkLaharl: Here's Chappie 6 that you've been waiting for!! Finally... a DATE?? let see what happens!
IchibanSatoshiChan: Hahah thankyou! i love the mornig fuzzy love too!


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Yay! chappie 6! Sorry for the late update! i was at grandma's and there's no internet there!!sorry, this time i was not able to make the picture thingy with Ohno's promises... so,,
Hai~ Dozo!

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CHAPTER 6

"Adopted?" Ara's eyes were wide open."Ah, hai.." Ohno simply replied. "It's true~!" Ritsuka added to make sure Ara believed them."But..how..why..and..Ritsuka, you don't mind? What i mean was.. how'd you accept it? " Ara looked at Ritsuka and Ohno waiting for an explanation.Ohno looked at Ritsuka and looked back at Ara "Anou...its a really long story.." he mumbled."Is it OK if i wanted to know?" Ara asked for permission."Hai. We don't mind"

*****************Explanation going on*******************

"Uwaaa~ i didn't know Ri-chan had been like that since she was small!!" Ara smiledwidely to Ritsuka and Ohno. "And you, a...um...""Ah, Sumimasen, my name is Satoshi." "Ah, Hai! You Satoshi-san, you are sooo sweet and gentle ne? Adopting her...

"Arigatou~" Ohno felt his cheeks warm. "Tou-san? Why is your face red?" Ritsuka looked at Ohno's face closey. "Ara kaa-chan~ Tou-san's face is red." Ritsuka looked at Ara."Oh really? Let me see if he has a faver." Ara slowly put her hands on Ohno's face. "Your cheeks are so warm Satoshi-san! are you having a fever?" Ohno pulled his face away from Ara's face. "Ah, daijoubu desu.."

Oh crap~! That was too close i mean TOO CLOSE!! Damn it.. now im blushing!!
Ohno put his hand on his face

"Talking about faces, i have to wash mine! Hahaah please excuse me!" Ara left for the washroom. ""Tou-san is it hot?" Ritsuka whispered to Ohno's ear."Ah yeah... its a little hot." Ohno replied."You can take the disguise off. The coat seems to be too thick and why wear a hat and scarf? Its not winter! And whats with the glasses?" Ritsuka flicked Ohno's forehead."Well i can't take it off. She might recognize me!" Ohno rubbed his forehead."She won't! She dosent know what's or who is Arashi! Look, she dosent even have a TV and a radio! Anyways i asked her before..if she knew Arashi." Ritsuka had a determined face.

"Well..." Before Ohno could finish Ara walked into the living room. "Ask me what about who?" Ara had a curious face while holding a towel to wipe her half wet face."Nothing" Ohno looked at her cleaned face with no paint on. Getting a clear look as it was now easier to know how she looked like without the paint all over her face.

She has a foreign-ish look..brown eyes...
Ohno look lower. Ending up looking at her lips
She has.. an adorable pink..pouty lips...
Ohno bit his lips.
Baka! Stop thinking about stupid things Satoshi!!!!
its not my fault!
Look at her!
Shut up!
Wait!!! Why am i talking to myself??



Ohno smacked himself on his forehead. "Daijoubu ka? Satoshi-san?" Ara broke Ohno from his thoughts and from talking to himself in his thoughts."Hai! Its just a little hot in here" Ohno gave an awkward smile."Hahaha Of course it hot! Look at you, wearing that coat, hat, scarf and sunglasses. Its not winter right? ake them off. You can keep your coat in the closet next to the entrance." Ara slowly giglgled while covering her mouth.

Ohno looked at Ritsuka wondering if it was ok. Ritsuka gave a reply by nodding her head showing its Ok."Hai. It was silly of me to be wearing this.." Ohno walked towards the closet. Ok...what happens if i go there and she recognises me? What do i do? What if my secret of having a kid be spreaded out? I the papers...and Johnny!!! My career is OVER!!!Ohno place his coat in the closet and walked into the living room.

Later if i stepped into the living room im sure she'll be like."Kyaa~~ its Ohno-san!! From arashi!! Eee?? wait! Ritsuka is your Kid!!!" What if that happens?

Ohno sat on the sofa next to Ritsuka. ""Eee?? Satoshi-san??" Ara looked at OhnoI knew it!!! She does recognise me!! Damn it! DAMN IT!!!Ohno looked scared. "You look soo young without all those coats and stuff! How old are you?" Ara looked suprised at Ohno.
"Eee??" Ohno was speechless.

What? thats it? No.. "Ohno-kun i love you~~" or "Kyaa~~ aren't you Ohno satoshi from Arashi??" maybe Ri-chan was right... she dosen't know me.. but just to make sure..

"I'm 28 years old..don't you know? I'm Ohno Satoshi. You know..from ARASHI" Ohno looked closely at Ara, waiting for a reaction."Ee? Arashi? You know, Ri-chan asked me about Arashi too. What is that? A Company?" Ara looked confuse."Oh. Nothing i was just fooling around.." Ohno just smiled

Ooo...So she dosent know who i am.. thats good news..

Ohno looked at Ritsuka who's giving him the 'I-told-you-so' look at him."So.. Satoshi-san, you said you were 28 yes?" Ara interrupted Ohno and Ritsuka's little mind-reading. "Ah, Hai. I'm 28 years Old." Ohno replied."Oh? You're so young! So you were 21 when you adopted her?" "Hai.""Wow. Thats so young who gave support? Were you married then""My mom. No, i was not married then heh..""Oh, you must have a supportive mother ne? Not married then? Well, you must be marired now. No?""No.. im still a single dude. You can say a single dad! Haha""Whaat? that's sch a waste! I mean you look so young to be a 28 year-old! i thought you were like 23 or 24 and you are so good looking its such a waste.. ne Ri-chan?""Hai~ my otou-san is soo kakkoi


Ohno blushed real hard he can feel his cheeks burning.

Too bad she dosent know about Johnny's strict rule...

"By the way, Satoshi-san what are you doing here? Ritsuka's class dosent end in another one hour.""Eee? really? i thought it ended...thats why i brought lunch...but seeing the time its already close to dinner." Ohno just looked down because he was embarresed."You can have Dinner here tou-san!! Can he Ara kaa-chan??" Ara tried too make Ohno feel better."Of course he can! You don't mind waiting Satoshi-san? i'll end her class faster so you both could go home earlier but before that have dinner here." Ara smiled warmly to Ohno. "Hai~ Ri-chan! Lets get back to our lesson! Lets go with... English!"

"Hai~" Ri-chan grabbed her english book."Chotto, Ri-chan...you're learning english?? But you're only ten... that so advanced!" Ohno gave a suprised look. "Hai. I've been learning for the past year now" Ritsuka replied."Waa~ Im an English-no-no well at least now Ri-chan can translate things for me" Ohno laughed."Tou-chan is soo lazyy~~!!!

Ara just looked at the two teasing each-other.
waa~~ i've never seen a father and daughter love like this!
Ara smiled to herself looking at Ohno and Ritsuka's fuzzy-fluffy-love"What are you smiling at?" Ohno realised Ara was staring at them."Are you sure you adopted her?!" Ara suddenly asked Ohno in a loud tone."Hai.. Why?"
"You guys are so sweet together! Every time i look i see this fuzzy-father-daughter-love and all that fluffyness and you both look a like! especially you're cheeks and mouth its all too kawaii~!" Ohno could see how sincere Ara was from her determined eyes.

"Arigatiu~ we are close." Ohno smiled to Ritsuka
"Hai~" Ritsuka smiled back.
"Well hurry up and lets get this lesson over with! Satoshi-san, can you look after Ritsuka for a while? I'm going to make dinner."
"Hai. Um..dinner? is it ok? I don't really..i mean you don't really..."
"Don't worry about it. So Ritsuka, what do you feel like eating?"
"Curry Rice!"
"Oh? Why is that?"
"Its because Tou-san likes Curry Rice. Spicy curry rice~ I wanna eat what Tou-san likes to eat"
"Oh, in that case, NO PROBLEM! Curry rice is my specialty! Is green curry ok Satoshi-san?" Ara rolled up her sleeves
"Ah..Hai.." Ohno looked down to the floor
"Green curry is perfect! Its Tou-chan's favourite!" Ritsuka started jumping.
"Really? Then that is good! I'll start making it."
Ara left for the kitchen to start cooking.

"So..tou-san.... what do you think of Ara kaa-chan?" Ritsuka let out a teasing tone.
"She's ok..i mean she's a great teacher." Ohno replied
"That's it?"
"Umm..yea.." Ohno blushed a little
"I think she'd be perfect for a mom.. ne?" Ritsuka llooked at Ohno in the eye.
"Yea... Why" Ohno looking at Ritsuka suspiciously
"No reason..i just wished you'd marry her"
"Hah? You do know that's impossible. Remember... JOHNNY'S?" Ohno gave a sad look.
"Why don't you just ask her out? I mean keep it a secret. Like how you kapt me a secret from JOHNNYS.."
Ohno blushed knowing that is possible"Don't you have work to do? " Ohno tried to stop Ritsuka from giving 'ideas'
"Fine..." Ritsuka started doing her work.

************ 30 minutes later~****************

"Hai~ Rice curry is done~~!" Ara came out holding a pot of curry.
"Ritsuka, get three plates in the kitchen please"
"Uwaa~ its done! Hai~" Ritsuka happily skipped to the kitchen

After setting up the dinner table and the food...

"Uwaa~ It looks soo delicious Ara kaa-chan!!"
"Arigatou~ Satoshi-san, please help yourself!"
"Ah, Hai.."
"ITADAKIMASU~~" Ritsuka took a mouthful spoon into her tiny mouth,
"Itaadaakiimaasuu~" Ara took her bite "Unn~ umai!"
"Itadakimasu.." Ohno shyly ate the Rice Curry. blush
"UMAII!!" Ohno just suddenly reacted to the food like how he normally do.
"Really?" Ara looked satisfied while she giggled
"un~ anou..whats so funny?" Ohno curiously asked.
"Your reaction was sudden but unexpectedly cute!" Ara cover her face trying hard not to laugh.
"Tou-san loves to eat and his reaction is really rare ne Ara Kaa-chan?" Ritsuka smiled.
Ara nodded her head.
"Ah.. I'm so sorry but this is really good..and.." Ohno started to feel guilty and a little panicked.
"Tou-chan~ there's nothing to worry about! Don't panic!"
"Eeeh?! I'm sorry for making you feel worse!! i just thought the reaction was cute!! Gomen!" Ara seek for forgivness from Ohno.
"Oh, its ok..really.. its just i'm just...u..a..nn.." Ohno started to blush

Ritsuka and Ara started to laugh at the silly Ohno. Them the three of them laughed together.

[Author:bla...bla..bla.. cutting off to the other part..lalalal]

Ohno and Ritsuka was at the door...
"Jaa~ Ara kaa-chaaaaan~~! See you tomorrow!!" Ritsuka waved to Ara
"Bye!!! See you tomorrow Ri-chaan~" Ara pinched Ritsuka's cheeks.
"Chuu~" Ritsuka kissed Ara's cheeks.
"Chuu~" Ara kissed Ritsuka's cheeks in return. "Remember to finish your homework."
"Hai~"

Ohno just look at the two getting comfortable with each other.

[Author:Well obviously he was looking at Ara! Woohooo~]

Ara noticed that Ohno was looking at her.
"Is there something you wanted to say Satoshi-san?" She asked Ohno. Making him stop staring at her.
"Ah! its nothing.." Ohno blushed
Ara smiled. She enjoyed loking at Ohno panicking as it was so cute to her, So se let out a tease
"Ooo..i know what you want.." Ara gave a cheeky smile to Ohno.
"Huh?" Ohno tried not to look at her.
"You wanna a kiss on the cheek too Satoshi-san?" Ara let out a teasing tone.
"Oh! Noo...! I ..a..anou.." Ohno started to blush and scratching the back of his neck "Its just...that.."
“Don‘t panic! I was joking.” Ara laughed at Ohno. “Ok then, you two should get home now. I have work to do. See you tomorrow ne Ri-chan?”
“Haii~ Ja!” Ritsuka waved . She happily skipped to the elevator leaving Ohno and Ara together.

“Anou.. Ara-san…” Ohno mumbled. “Hmm?” Ara sweetly replied to Ohno.
“I was wondering..”
“Yes?”
“Are you free this weekend?”
"This weekend?"
"Hai.."
"Umm... Yea. Both Saturday and Sunday."
"I Was wondering..."
"Yea..?"
"You see, i was planning to go fishing with Ri-chan and... i was wondering if you'd like to come along..."
"Me? Really? Is it Ok?"
"Hai! Well if you'd like too come."
"Sure. I'd be happy too! So its a date!"
"A date?"
"Hai. Then, see you soon~"
"Hai!"

Ara smiled and slowly closed the door, leaving Ohno quite speechless.
"Date...huh?" Ohno mumbled. "Yoshi~~!!!" He happily walked to the elevator.

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Yay~ end of story! So ohno finally got a date huh? hahah Well as Ri-chan as an excuse! Well until next time~~ Sorry for the late post!!! >o<

Comments are appreciated! Im sorry for the spelling errors and stuff. And uhh.. I'm sorry if my story is quite hard to understand!!!


Bye!bye!
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 28, 2009 1:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ohno's really shy, huh? i wander what will happen next..Oo...tsk tsk tsk *will be waiting for next update*
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 7:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I totally agree with Ichiban SatoshiChan~ Ohno and Ritsuka fuzzy love is sooo cute!! its one of my favourite parts~ Waa~~ On a date huh?? Can't wait till next chappie~ *awaits patiently* I'm a new reader~ Nashiya desu. Waa!! there's 2 new fanfic? Ohno and Nino?? i shall read!!! *looks for Maou and Memory in Complete* Hope you'll update soon!!!!
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 3:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

yay! more fuzzy father daughter love!!! <3
awwwwwwww i want to be Ara-san!!!
and go fishing date with Satoshi-chan -^^-

"I'm 28 years old..don't you know? I'm Ohno Satoshi. You know..from ARASHI"
- haha!! i love this part!! i can imagine ohno saying that to someone, if he said to me.. id be like.. OHNO!!!!! *glomp* lol!

loving your story~ cant wait till next chappie! big grin
and you are writing a nino fic???? big grin


oh and also Naya143 i love your icon!
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 8:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

This story is so cute !!!
Ritsuka is mecha kawaii !
Ara seems to be very fun
I love the fluffyness of this story
It's so sweet and heartwarming
You did a great job writing this story
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 6:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

DarkLaharl : Haha yes, he is quite shy ne? What'll happen next? You have read and see~
Naya143 : Hi! Thx for reading.
IchibanSatoshiChan: Hahah yes i could imagine as well! lets glomp him together!
YukiRawrsx3 : Thankyou for taking your time in reading this~ i really appreaciate it!! Heart

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Hi minna~

thankyou for the support!! I'm sorry for the late update. My internet had problems!! In the coming future, please expect me to update at least once a week.

Hai, Douzo!

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CHAPTER 7


"Ok! From the top!" Ohno danced with maximum energy as he was in a good mood. None of them can read his moves and he was way too fast. "Chotto! Ohno-kun you're too fast! How are we supposed to keep up?!" Nino whined while panting on the floor barely able to breathe. "Yea. Your tension seems to be rising like crazy!!! What's up?" Aiba fell on the floor next to Nino. The both of them looked like dead squids on the floor.
"Gomen~ i didn't realize i was fast. I was just enjoying the song thats all~" Ohno gave a pout, putting his hands together asking for an apology.
"Fine~ we'll take 15! Minna can rest now!" Ohno happily walked out from the dance studio. Standing next to the door , with a towel rapped around his head and his phone in his hands. Ohno kept on smiling while he was going through his messages .
He kept on reading the massages he received from Ara.

Konbanchiwa~

Ara desu. Is this Satoshi-san? I hope it is.
Anou Satoshi-san, about going out this weekend, i'm really looking
forward to go. (^ o ^) /
Thankyou again for inviting me !
Hope to see you soon ^ ^.


Hope to see me soon? Ohno smiled to himself. I can't wait too! All he did was smile to himself. until Aiba inturrupted.

BANG!!

"Uwaa!!!" Ohno shouted due to shock of the sound of the door."Oh-chan!!! " Aiba shouted in searched of Ohno.
"Whaaat??!" Ohno gave Aiba a glare. "Ah! Oh-chan! your phone...." Aiba pointed to the floor.
"Aaaaahh~~!!!!" Ohno was shocked to see his phone on the floor. The screen was cracked and it was blank. "My phone!!!" Ohno fell on his knees.
"Gomenasai!!! I didn't mean to..." Aiba apologised to Ohno. Ohno stood up and left Aiba. Ohno quietly entered the studio. "Ohno....kun?" Aiba looked at Ohno walking away without a word.

"Hai~! Lets get back to practice!" Ohno clapped his hands to get everyones attention.
"Whaat? Already? But it was only five minutes..." Nino moaned.
"Stop complaining." Ohno answered coldly.
Ohno played the radio and started dancing on his own.
"Whats up with him? He seems to be in a bad mood for somereason..." Nino whispered to Sho.
"Yeah...".
"It was my fault." Aiba proclaimed. "I made him drop his phone and i think its broken.... i didnt know the phone was really important..." Aiba looked really guilty. Sho and Nino looked at each other. Worried about their leader who was usually not easily upset being upset and what more he is talking to them coldly.
Looking at Aiba's guilty face, Sho knew he didnt mean to have hurt Ohno's feelings.
"Hai, wakatta!" Sho suddenly spoke
"Nani?" Nino and Aiba both looked at Sho. "I'll fix his phone. Do you know where it is Aiba-chan?"

"Hai" Aiba pointed to where Ohno's phone was. Sho stood up walking towards the broken phone. He took it and started fixing it. "Does he know how to fix a phone Aiba-chan?" Nino whispered to Aiba. "I don't think so..not that i've seen him fix anyones phone." Aiba replied. Nino and Aiba watched attentively Sho fixing Ohno's phone.

"Hai~! i think it should be fixed!" Sho proudly switched the phone on. "Waa!! its working! Sho-kun! Sugoii!!!!!!!" Aiba and Nino clapped their hands happily. Sho turned to Ohno. "Oh-chan~ i think your phone is fine now." Ohno turned over to Sho. "Eh? How'd you know its broken?" Ohno walked towards Sho. "Aiba told me." Sho pointed to Aiba. "Ah... gomen ne Aiba-chan? I got mad over something this silly...." Ohno bowed for forgiveness. "Ah, its ok. It was my fault." Aiba smiled.

"Minna~ i've got the schedule for this saturday!!" Jun came into the studio holding a few sheets of paper. "Ah~!! Hontou?!" Everyone gathered around Jun. "Hai. It says that we are packed for saturday and sunday...and..we-" Before Jun could continue, Ohno interrupted. "Chotto Matte!!! Were fully packed on the weekends? THIS WEEKEND?!" Everyone looked at Ohno's surprised expression. "Hai..were packed...we have photoshoots..and..." Jun mumbled while looking through the schedule.

Ohno felt as if the whole world crashed on him. date....date.... Ohno bit his lips. "So desu ka...?" Ohno walked to the corner of the room and sat there, facing the wall. "What's wrong with Riida?" Jun whispered to Sho. "I dunno... he has this weird mood swings..." Sho whispered back. Nino let out a sigh and walk towards Ohno. "Doshita no Oh-chan? Did you have plans?" Nino sat neat to Ohno.

"Well... i did have plans..." Ohno sulked. "Why not go next time. We can go together ne?" Nino tried to his riida up. "Unnn..." Ohno just stared at the wallNino sighed and left Ohno alone. "What's wrong?" Aiba whispered to Nino. "I dunno.. he said he had plans.." Nino sat Between Jun and Sho. "What's making him upset so much.... i wonder..." Jun mumbled. "Who knows..." everyone just look at their upset leader.

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Beep~Beep~Beep~

Ara picked her phone up and answered it. "Moshi-moshi? Ara desu. Hai, Michimoto-san~! Hai... this weekend? But i've got pla-... But, i... Hai, yes...yes..i'll be there." Ara let out a frustrating sigh. "Aww... how'd i forgot about plans i made with Michi-san..... But Ritsuka and Satoshi...." Ara threw herself on the bed. She shut her eyes and thought. But if i call now and explain, im sure Satoshi-san will understand...

Ara reached out for her phone and dialed Ohno's number.

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Beep~Beep~Beep~

"Ohno-kun, your phone is ringing~!" Sho called Ohno. "Who's calling?" Ohno replied back. Previously, few hours before, Ohno was in a bad mood but after a while he was finally after having lunch. Ohno, now is dancing with the other arashi members. "Umm..Ara..? Ara. Who's Ara?" Sho checked Ohno's phone. As soon as Ohno heard Ara's name he immediately grabbed the phone from Sho hands and ran out the studio.

"What's up with him?" Nino asked Sho. Sho only raised his shoulders showing that he didn't know. "Who knows...Let's just continue without him. Anyways, he knows his steps." Jun replayed the music and started dancing followed by the other members.

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"Moshi-moshi? Satoshi desu...."
"Moshi-moshi? Sorry for calling Satoshi-san. Are you busy?"
"Not really. What's up?"
"Um, i have something to say about this weekend...."
"Ah, that reminds me, Ara... i have something to say as well..."
"Yes? i'm listening..."
"About this weekend.. i can't make it. I know i invited you and it really rude to back off and.."
"Hahahah wakarimashita."
"Eh? you're not mad Ara-san?"
"No. I'm not Satoshi-san. Well, i can't make it either. I have work i've forgotten about. Gomen ne?"
"Ah, thats ok. I have work to do as well. Its last minute really."
"Ok then, we can go out together with Ritsuka-chan next time ne?"
"Hai..."
"Oyasumi~"
"Oyasumi nasai~"
"Jaa."

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Ohno ended the call. He walked back into the studio and continued dancing with the others. "Who was that?" Jun asked. "Mmm.. a friend of mine..." Ohno answered.

I guess i wont see her for a while ne?

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Thx for reading this far~
sorry for spelling n grammar errors~
Comments are Heart Heart

I know this chapter is quite short. I'll post cahppie 8 as soon as possible ne?
Till next time, Jaa~
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